Without you
I'm a rain race
The cloud in the spring
An island in the embrace of the sea
Without you
There is no place
All windows are closed
So gray, the sun's face
After years of chasing
I just got a part
In the red dream of your kiss
The last grace
(2008/8/17)
Without her you are alone, with an empty heart you carry, a 'red dream' - you'll never own Great read Shiraz! *10*! ! Friend Thad
Lovely way to express to someone how they complete you. Lovely written. Enjoyed it.
Without 'YOU', nothing you are, living without meaning, floating alone in the ocean of love and life...........lovely indeed.
...a 10 has been given to nightingle of shiraz with joy for this nice composition!
A very romantic poem that touches the heart dearly. Such sweet words that softens the hard headed! Thanks for a lovely write.
rain, cloud, island and sea if a poem has one of those it could be good what do you think it a poem has all of those? 8++++++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very moving write enjoyed the softness of your pen and the harmony of your words thankyou Chris 10