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a butterfly girl!

I am a butterfly girl,
With beautiful frills,
Of printed designs,
The body is very thin,
To go into the slim fit,
The tights has the size,
The zebra lines, not to cross,
No changing of colors,
Comfortable with single suit,
The mouth filled with sweets,
The body has the flakes,
Journey through weeks and months,
I am a butterfly girl,
With kind spiky legs,
To walk on the flowers.

Submitted: Thursday, December 20, 2012


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  • Chandra Thiagarajan (12/23/2012 6:01:00 AM)

    Nice personification of the butterfly. The description is resplendent and the poem captures the heart.

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  • Pradip Chattopadhyay (12/21/2012 1:26:00 AM)

    Portrayed so graphically that I can see it.10.

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  • Scotty Dogg (12/20/2012 10:30:00 AM)

    You got it nailed. Poetry is about images and you get it. Nice job!

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  • Sallam Yassin (12/20/2012 9:42:00 AM)

    let whole world be your flowers field
    nice poem

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