Kranthi Pothineni

A Candle In Wind - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Storm is at the bay
Light is going away
Darkness filled in way
Heart is empty to pay
The last lit of its ray

In its pursuit of gay
Year passed like day
With no words to say
Closed eyes to pray
For the smell of clay

Rain is going to spray
To wet time in gray
Sure for long to stay
With nothing left to slay
Music of pathos on play

There will be no hay
Nor someone’s prey
Only memories of may
And the words of nay
To be part of the lay

Wind left me to stray
With a empty tray
But light said ay
Don’t ever get dismay
Life is not just today

Comments about A Candle In Wind by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Gold Star - 38,211 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (5/12/2014 10:04:00 AM)

    Hope and light is interconnected and poem also. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,164 Points Walterrean Salley (12/24/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    As long as there is LIGHT. there is hope. Light is hope. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 956 Points Indira Renganathan (7/7/2009 3:53:00 AM)

    A poem with perfect rhyming....10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,361 Points Saadat Tahir (6/29/2009 6:47:00 AM)

    nice kranthi
    the tongue literraly runs with the rhyme and poem
    superb write
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/27/2009 6:48:00 AM)

    Always hope of tomorrow (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (6/27/2009 5:51:00 AM)

    nice rhymes
    good flow of the tongue (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,290 Points Louis Rams (6/26/2009 11:01:00 AM)

    the wind and rain is here today, but tommorrow will bring a brighter day.

    a good write a ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/26/2009 9:53:00 AM)

    'Wind left me to stray
    With a empty tray
    But light said ay
    Don’t ever get dismay
    Life is not just today'

    This is an inspirational write friend... but for the moment i d like to live the day.. sometimes thinking too much doesn't gona help either! ! ! !
    this is a beautiful write friend 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/26/2009 6:30:00 AM)

    'Wind left me to stray
    With a empty tray
    But light said ay
    Don’t ever get dismay
    Life is not just today'

    Marvelous and melodious poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (6/26/2009 6:19:00 AM)

    nice flow and beautiful rhyms............ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/26/2009 6:17:00 AM)

    nice rhymes...very poetic (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points premji premji (6/26/2009 6:14:00 AM)

    what a rhyming! from where did you get all these y's?
    lovely write............ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (6/26/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    vow! really inspiring. rhyming too.
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Pink Butterfly ... (6/26/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! You're the best rhymer ever! I can't imagine making a poem like this! It's one of a kind and it's really cute! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/26/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    ..........AY rhymes, well structured. A Candle In The Wind like the song says...fine poetic piece...10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 26, 2009

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