nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 144 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

A Cataract eyed Gardener and a wild Rose


'My dear, you pour me water or tears as I feel the warmth it seems
And do not get upset please as I keep my word forever.'
Wild Rose said faithfully.
'I am a poor deserter Rose and how do we live together happily? '
Cowardice Gardener replied.
'That doesn't make any difference my darling
Your wheelbarrow is quite enough for our honeymoon and your humble straw-house really a castle for me.' Wild Rose pacified him kindly.

Submitted: Saturday, September 20, 2008

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Comments about this poem (A Cataract eyed Gardener and a wild Rose by nimal dunuhinga )

  • Rookie - 123 Points Diana Van Den Berg (2/27/2009 11:24:00 AM)

    A exquisitely tender conversation such as this can only be written by a compassionate poet caring enough to observe with the heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (9/21/2008 8:03:00 AM)

    A charming fable. Lovely and other worldly, like a rich fairy tale.
    Who would not be enchanted?

    Kind regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (9/20/2008 7:18:00 PM)

    You serve up your compassion tenderly, in a vase of enchanting blooms. I never cease to marvel at your extraordinary talent. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (9/20/2008 6:34:00 PM)

    Simply divine poetry in motion here nimal! So wise. Smiling at you, Tai (Report) Reply

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