“It will pass”- the
Agonizing moment tilts
The living stage;
Augurs the movement of
Its octopus’s ledge;
Another pass will mount
Onto the past pace;
Unbeknownst till further
Ado-
Revealed at the recess
Of shadow-
Tangled with dissipated pain-
Across the canyon lane-
20/11/08
What a write..wonderful...caveat has a remedy of silent pace...excellent
This is a phrase I use often in my mind when in a situation I don't like. 'This too shall pass.' I think it's a very uplifting thought. It will pass and we can move on. Great job, Mousumi! A '10! ' Best Wishes, Marilyn
a write coming out of deeply hurt feelings...reflecting on a philosophic mental screen...structure and word selection excellent...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hi Indira, Thank you for the wonderful feeling i got from your words... Please have a look on 'THIRSTY LOOK' mousumi