**a Cheerful Poem For Whom Will Be Caught..For The Big Rat Poem by TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

**a Cheerful Poem For Whom Will Be Caught..For The Big Rat

Rating: 3.0


note: iam still under the attack of the Rats WHOM THANKFULLY push my poems to be advanced in top 500.....and by the way..they come to the trap by themselves...many have been caught....26/9/09...


I close my windows, my doors and for you a trap I left in WHICH you will be caught,

...for my poems which have been degraded to 2 and to 7. eight.

. put for you some pieces of poisonous meet, little biscuit..and on A golden plate some sticky cheese and broken bone
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the great, fruitful trees with hard stones always will be thrown by whom has ugly trait...

will be in wait if you dare to give THEN give me that low rate...and gaze in my eyes and ventilate and tell why all this hate and all that thorn

lol..this is a mini poem which i will update...


FOR WHOM CONTINUE TO GIVE ME 1/10..THEY ARE MORE THAN ONE RAT...


hi friends..iam still facing trouble in commenting..what i face is different than any one of you, i hope you will look around and seee what happened to my poems..my best poems were visited one by one by a group of people and the poem which wasrated 10/10 44 times decreased suddenly to 7.8 or 8.3 what does that mean if you are good in calculation..it is not done by just one but by many and this is not a healthy situation here..
i aplogize..i made this poem as a funn and no i will not makemy self do not see.every body has to know what is going on..just please try to see more than popularity and rating..try to know and see that there is thefting and not poetry and this has to be raised to ph staff may be they can change little of this ugly attitudes of some...............alright i said i will check the rating before i put this and it happened they are here and i will discover them and say their name on puplic...........thanks

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priya kumar 03 September 2009

hats off 2 u pal....beautiful work...i mean it

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Ken E Hall 03 September 2009

Actions speaks louder than words their actions are your answer Beats me..keep writing regards

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Braja K Sarkar 03 September 2009

As a serious reader, I can say that it is a multi dimensional good poem.I am concern only about the craftmanship of the poem, not about the history behind it.So, the poem is a good one.

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Shashendra Amalshan 03 September 2009

Okay it was 7.9 before I read this peace.. now it become 8 Because I rated it ten! ! ! ! happy for you! ! 1 nice love shan

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 September 2009

Ha ha ha how many rats you would catch Where millions of people living as rat’s life In this world! Be kind upon them! Rats are helpless in true sense but they are Useful too! Rating and pop poppppularity is nothing for The poets who are true to their vision Poets can not dance with air air pomp pomp If poet pretentious in the end uglify his soul By himself/herself! The smell of extremism in the sign (! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !) if used too much! Energy where not? In positive and in negative too! Why you’re wasting valuable time? I always give everyone 10+ Why? Bcoz art is beyond rating! (rats know not how to rate)  See, some great poet Here withdraw rating options! I salute them! Tell me about your bang thud thud in the air! Where some join Without spending a coin! Why you made your titles page clumsy Writing extra words useless! Your poems are good enough! Why this way—lo lo lo lo come come see see I am I am bla bla bla Why too much tittle-tattle dear poet tamara! Come to the point, if one say, he/she like a poem rate 2 or 3 Its his/her choice, you can not call him/her rat! Intentionally who do this, he/she just cheating his/her mind! This is virtual world! There are many tools to manipulate In a fraudulent way! In the previous post, too, you used offensive turms to your fellow poets friend that who support not you they are not true poet! Objectionable! Psychologically, it shows, inferiority complex! and Creats a friend into a foe! What you have achieved for Last one month from commotion this way! Nothing! So being a poet friend, my request to you Just let all this bla bla bla! And enlighten us with your verses With your tremendous work out! Poemhunter an amazing largest platform! So far I know this a garden of poets, not political field! Voice alike politician here can Pollute environment! In conclusion, a joke- One day tamara may say- who just click on rating option(for any number) he/she is a RAT! ****In below Noel Horlanda's comments thoughtful! Best wishes

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 14 April 2010

Good! ! ! you caught the dirty rats.I enjoyed your poem.

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James Mclain 25 September 2009

Do not worry about it dear.. You said..lol..the dirty rats.. Your cheese so dear they wast.. Hidding in the sand... i do.. and there it is..i wait.. like you..for crumbs to come.. my way from you...iip...so smile.. :)

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Anand Madhukar 16 September 2009

All that really matters in the end is that you write beautiful poetry.

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Afzal Shauq 14 September 2009

very much realistic approach and the way you wrote this piece is enough interesting heart feeling type..well done and hope you wil write more and more..10/10

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Rup Pokharel 13 September 2009

I like your art. Good art indeed. I love ready ur fine art keep it up. 10+++

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