A Comment On Dr.Theodore's Poem I Want To Feel God's Presence Now Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Comment On Dr.Theodore's Poem I Want To Feel God's Presence Now

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Your vision is scattered I feel your presence,
I listen to you in music and in fine arts,
But I want to feel your presence in the human hearts,
May I know the reasons of your absence?
I want you as a rose in my bosom,
With an aroma can you ever blossom?

A Comment On Dr.Theodore's Poem I Want To Feel God's Presence Now
Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: existence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 10 July 2018

I want you as a rose in my bosom, With an aroma can you ever blossom? simply beautiful my dear Akhtar.... i have always told you. your comments are in itself poems.. you are so talented and yet so simple hearted.. such should be the heart of a poet. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2018

ButBut I want to feel your presence in the human hearts, May I know the reasons of your absence? I want you as a rose in my bosom, With an aroma can you ever blossom? I want to feel your presence in the human hearts, May I know the reasons of your absence? I want you as a rose in my bosom, With an aroma can you ever blossom? ..........so touching with a nice theme. Beautiful poem relating to spirituality. I appreciate this poem.10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 July 2018

A succinct write yet profound. A wonderful poem that affirms the.existence of the Lord Almighty. It echoes faith. A well crafted write.10++++++

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