(Ageless / Dominican Republic)

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A Creative Mind

The solid foundation of an ideal
Is the equivalent to the depth
Of the mind and the hands
Which design destiny...

Borders outlined
By the possibility of success
Delineating the horizons
Of a renew energy of life...

Entirely new,
Outer dimensions,
Dissolve the staleness,
Replacing it with creativity...

Cosmic and dynamic forces
Are all counterparts
Of a unique shaped form
Which has no end or beginning
Like a circumference...

Poignant and rich thoughts
Freely traversing the universe
And breaking the barrier of time
To carry the true message of:
'Love and Peace for always'!


©All Rights Reserved-2011

Submitted: Thursday, December 15, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, October 30, 2012


Comments about this poem (A Creative Mind by Romeo Della Valle )

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  • Maria C. Costa (2/5/2013 2:14:00 PM)

    Your insightful thoughts and blessed hands have designed a truly creative, fraternal, and desirable universal message! Loved it! Thanks very much.
    Maria

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  • David Gerardino (4/7/2012 5:51:00 PM)

    very good, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , i can see the words.

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  • Aman Sa (3/20/2012 4:57:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines...Carry on my friend, , , your honesty and simplicity make ur poems such wonderful reading

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  • Greg Uhan (12/29/2011 2:21:00 AM)

    Spot on truth! Top notch work Romeo. Let me give my thanks to all the advice and support you've offered this past year. Your poems are beloved. You helped teach the ways of true poetry.
    Best wishes to you in 2012,
    your friend and brother poet,
    Greg

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  • Vipins Puthooran (12/20/2011 1:27:00 PM)

    [Creativity is the art of heart]
    A great poem! ! Top marks! !

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  • Ramesh Rai (12/19/2011 6:10:00 AM)

    A poet is always a creative, he/she can never be negative. great write. nice poem

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  • Lenore Lee (12/15/2011 9:27:00 PM)

    So true. A creative mind has depth in the mind and the heart that an unoriginal one doesn't. If we use our creativity we can give messages of our deepest beliefs throughout the world.

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