Mihaela Pirjol

A Cricket (Children's Poem) - Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

You, strange creature cricket green
When I first saw you I froze with fear,
But then I heard your 'creak-creak' voice
One summer day, and I rejoiced.

Now every time your 'creak-creak' sing,
So joyful are the months of spring;
Dandelions sways in harmony
And to me is the sweetest melody!

Topic(s) of this poem: children

Comments about A Cricket (Children's Poem) by Mihaela Pirjol

  • Gold Star - 20,753 Points Daniel Brick (11/24/2014 2:34:00 PM)

    It's wonderful how quickly the child goes from fear to joy and then adopts the cricket as a familiar companion. And she joins the dandelions dancing to the cricket's song. I agree with Rachel Sunprincess this is a perfect summer poem. I could even feel the warm sunshine on me and see the bright green colors everywhwere. For a suspended moment it was summer... Then winter returned. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Anthony Di''anno (10/31/2014 1:24:00 PM)

    A delightful write, nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,619 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/19/2014 10:36:00 AM)

    You have captured a sweet melody in a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 521 Points John Brown (7/22/2014 8:44:00 AM)

    A pretty little poem. It made me smile. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,928 Points * Sunprincess * (6/17/2014 11:09:00 AM)

    .........ohh this is a beautiful and perfect summer's poem.....truly loved reading this one.....adding to my favourites... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 17, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, October 6, 2014

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