A Cute Poem From A Cute Girl Poem by Mary Wismer

A Cute Poem From A Cute Girl

Rating: 3.9


They are the tiny drops from the sky.
Who are so pure that they cannot deny
They quietly listen to all that we say
Then, touch the earth or vanish in a bay.
When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
And your touch have chased away all of my fear
you have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
it is even better every time you smile.
You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I can not deny
You put my soul from worst to best
That is why I treasure you my dearest……..
Feel our bodies pressed close
As close as skin to skin,
Open your heart to me……
Come on, let me in
Fill my senses with your rush
Let me taste your deep kiss,
Hold me tightly to your heart.

It so magical those things you've made
to bring back my faith that almost fade
now my life is a dream come true
it all began when I was loved by you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Toft 07 March 2012

Nice, poetic description of life.

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Passionate Flower 14 March 2012

wow so cute poem from such a wonderful and cute girl very attractive description of love and really love bring the best of us and I mean loving the right person love the smoothly way of the writing with simple language i admire it thanx

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Janri Gogeshvili 25 February 2008

Yes, nice, but it is thin and it is clever …

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Marvin Brato 26 May 2008

Indeed a very cute poem from a cute girl! A 10.

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Gajanan Mishra 07 March 2013

life is a dream come true.

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Chinedu Dike 08 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry.

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Upendra Upm 14 March 2017

You changed my world with blink of an eye. - honesty of feeling.great honesty that has found words.

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Roseann Shawiak 10 January 2016

A blessed tale of true love, feelings rise with every line expressing emotions of being loved unconditionally. Romantically astute. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Chinedu Dike 19 April 2015

A beautiful piece of poetry depicting the blissful and transformational power of love. A well articulated and nicely penned poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Allan Farran 12 March 2014

Yes indeed it was a cute poem from a cute girl I enjoyed if immensely, I felt love fuel the poem completely

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