A Deep Scar Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Deep Scar

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A deep scar
Sunday,19th Dec 2021
Life is what I dreamed
Sunshine always beamed
yet the grief always loomed large
taking away the happiness of my age
You showed me the way
and stayed
in life for quite good period
feeling the void
suddenly you left behind a deep scar
went beyond reach and far
I could see you in the sky, shining star
eyes turn wet with tears
my bones are cracking
and jerking
while walking
yet inside it is talking
life is same as it was before
turning the sweetness into the sore
feeling runs high like a tide
I feel sad and not able to decide
Dr Hasmukh Mehta
D.Litt, Folt
World poet laureate
© Hasmukh A. Mehta

A Deep Scar
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feeling runs high like a tide I feel sad and not able to decide Dr Hasmukh Mehta D.Litt, Folt World poet laureate © Hasmukh A. Mehta
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