Marieta Maglas

Gold Star - 5,304 Points (19-05-1964 / Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania)

A Delicate Rainy Morning - Poem by Marieta Maglas

If I felt that you had been here,
it was because your angel would have touched me with his wing like a breeze,
and
you would have been here with him
in an indestructible sensation.
Maybe you thought if the angel had told me,
I would have known,
but he wouldn't have said anything.
He would never tell me,
but I've been waiting for you,
to give me your love
in rainy mornings
with hopeless awakes...

Copyright © Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: angel

Form: Blues Poem


Comments about A Delicate Rainy Morning by Marieta Maglas

  • Kathy Van Kurin (11/18/2016 1:17:00 AM)

    A delicate rainy morning
    Marieta maIngleas,
    Hello, I am new to your writing. this was a delight. Inner freshness of thought regarding the devoted purity of affection for another. With angelic presence. Brush of his wing but he would not tell me. Hope just speaks out in this lovely poem. Thankyou for writing blessings, Kathy
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  • Rebecca Navarre (10/20/2016 8:08:00 PM)


    Oh Wow! ! ! Incredibly Beautiful write! ! ! Just Flows, In Heart, and In Mind! ! ! Loved It! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/20/2015 11:45:00 PM)


    The angel had his own way of telling me about the poet's muse but the man had his own limitations. Very well explained. Thanks.
    but I've been waiting for you,
    to give me your love
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  • (11/20/2015 10:13:00 PM)


    I love rain
    either from sky
    or from your eye
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  • Gajanan Mishra (11/20/2015 8:32:00 PM)


    give me your love and stay in peace.. (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2015 9:05:00 AM)


    As lovely and delicate as a rainy morning this poem takes the heart away. Simply beautiful! Loved it. Wonderful to read it as member poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/20/2015 1:14:00 AM)


    Very nice. Falling in love with rain gives immense pleasure. (Report) Reply

  • (7/28/2015 2:46:00 PM)


    Very touching and well written. (Report) Reply

  • Daniel Brick (6/23/2015 10:26:00 AM)


    Calling this a Blues Poem is very appropriate. At a concert many years ago the Blues singer Taj Mahal told us the Blues can be many things but they ALWAYS have to be s-w-e-e-t, and your poem is suffused with sweetness peeking through the sadness of a lost opportunity for love/affection/sharing. I noticed you used the helping verb WOULD five times in 13 lines - that verb precisely expresses the sadness of lost opportunity. But the movement of this poem has a compelling counter-rhythm expressed in the sheer loveliness of the DELICATE RAINY MORNING. Do you know Shakespeare's line MERCY DROPPETH AS THE GENTLE RAIN FROM HEAVEN TO THE PLACE BELOW? That's the counter-rhythm which saves the poem from abject sadness so the sweet blues can work their magic and salvage some happiness in the promise of love in the future. This rainfall is shining! (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (6/12/2015 8:23:00 PM)


    Beautiful sister, just beautiful. A feeling of tranquility came over me as I read this gem of a poem...thank you for the treat..... (Report) Reply

  • Simpa Omoluabi (5/20/2015 4:06:00 AM)


    rains come with their baggage... (Report) Reply

  • Leonard Dabydeen (8/28/2010 5:46:00 AM)


    Just listen to the voice of the rain...the angel will bring you your wish ...not hopeless...Like your mood...your poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (4/25/2010 11:34:00 AM)


    For me not so easy to understand 4 lines…’waiting’ and ‘hopeless awakes’ …needs contemplation

    But rest part of poetry is a flowething emotion and excellent…
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (2/15/2010 5:09:00 AM)


    I wish i could have such a lovely morning.....so sensually you described! ! ! Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee (1/28/2010 12:23:00 PM)


    Great expectations not at all belied.. Hopes washed in the glow of the bright raindrops...Angelic effulgence of poetry..felt by the readers (Report) Reply

  • (12/22/2009 2:35:00 PM)


    From: Mike Keys (New Zealand ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 12/22/2009 2: 09: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: your delicate rainy morning


    feeling in rain... for rainy touch...beautiful poem

    Mike
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  • (12/18/2009 10:32:00 AM)


    From: Karin Rodrigues (Argentina ;)
    To: Marieta Maglas
    Date Time: 12/18/2009 9: 35: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject: A delicate rainy morning


    Wonderful love poem ethereally expressed

    Karin
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  • (11/29/2009 5:22:00 AM)


    I feel in the entire poem nature has been addressed.The angel touches with the wing which is breeze, , rain is expected which will shower the love to the poet.Finally rain arrives also.Or in a rainy morning a human being is addresseded whose arrival is expected? Whatever it is, in a crisp manner, a beautifully written poem.Marieta's all poems exhibit a high standard. (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2009 6:54:00 AM)


    Tender and dreamy.
    A classy poem.
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  • (11/10/2009 10:46:00 AM)


    a rainy morning......i liked this expression...and i liked the poem as well
    10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 4, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, February 13, 2015


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