Crimson Love

Rookie - 67 Points (18 / Prince Charming)

A Distant Love - Poem by Crimson Love

I'm the angel sent to protect you.
Watching your life through closed eyes,
I watch and observe.
Such a delicate creature of beauty,
My heart Begins to attack my mind with longing,
Wanting to hold you forever, even longer than eternity,
My heart's exploding with the thought of you,
So painful; love hurts,
Watching my hidden desire from a far,
Never together only distanced by love.

Comments about A Distant Love by Crimson Love

  • Gold Star - 11,241 Points Allotey Abossey (6/30/2015 12:53:00 AM)

    Love is a beautiful thing my friend...... Good one there (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie ayesha alb (4/22/2015 1:39:00 PM)

    such an adorable !! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ovi Hale (7/18/2012 12:14:00 AM)

    Passionate, true and plainly wondrous writing.
    It's a fine piece of art. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (11/11/2011 5:53:00 AM)

    Crim, you wana bring tears to other children's eyes? ..this is a great piece of art my fellow poet and many of us can relate to it....WOW! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Crimson Love (10/28/2011 9:12:00 PM)

    hehehe I love Alex Manson! =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alex Manson (10/28/2011 6:56:00 PM)

    i love this, crim! yeah, that's your new nickname...'crim'. :) no but seriously, i'm very inspired by this, it's beautiful, just like you, except you're just plain gorgeous.... XD (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonali Sings (10/20/2011 12:47:00 PM)

    God has His ways of testing love by keeping two apart, making it divine with distance bringing them together in heaven. Simply loved reading. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lenore Lee (10/16/2011 8:02:00 PM)

    This must be a very difficult thing for you, to love but for it to be almost impossible for the two of you to be together. I've been through something similar, wondrous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dianna Renate Evans (10/14/2011 1:09:00 PM)

    I love the poem that is how i feel about my past ex so I love it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,798 Points Rohit Sapra (10/3/2011 6:22:00 AM)

    To be honest, these verses of yours brought tears in my eyes. I can in actuality, relate to this poem. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jessie Hopkins (9/28/2011 6:35:00 AM)

    To love but not to have. A cruel thing that many have to experience. A wonderful poem to share, thank you. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (9/19/2011 4:45:00 PM)

    It is hard, to love but not touch, to want but not have. Beautiful writing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 19, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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