Crimson Love

(18 / Prince Charming)

A Gentle Heart


I sleep by my love,
Holding her close.
Feeling the beat of her gentle heart.

I whisper in her ear 'I love you'
She turns to me and says ' your my everything'
I look into your eyes with crippling devotion,
We share a bond unseen By the eye,
A love always willing to Defy.

Submitted: Sunday, September 18, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

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  • Rookie - 158 Points Harindhar Reddy (11/5/2011 1:39:00 PM)

    Amazing poem with sensitivity at best and sentiment at the highest peak. Simply superb! I say! :) :) :) :)
    'We share a bond unseen By the eye,
    A love always willing to Defy.' (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jinal Oswal (10/19/2011 4:36:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! Simple but strong lines... An eye can say things which the words cannot define.. Loved it! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lenore Lee (10/16/2011 8:06:00 PM)

    This brought tears to my eyes to know that it is possible to love so deeply that you only need to hold her to know she'll always love you back. Love is always willing to defy anyone and anything else, I adore your true poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Diana Rose Tolentino (10/6/2011 11:11:00 PM)

    a sense of contentment, just holding her and knowing that your love is reciprocated. this poem is lovely and soothing.
    amazing write..thanks (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Delicate Heart (9/19/2011 2:25:00 AM)

    splendidly written, so romantic and moving, it touched my heart and moved from the inside.
    love can keep us alive.
    no matter where we arrive.
    gives us all we harbour and need.
    joy, simile and the ultimate lead.
    life is hell of a life when you are no more.
    when you are left alone aching for losing the war.
    love goes on and on and it's never wrong. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Romeo Della Valle (9/18/2011 10:22:00 AM)

    Love is A Challenge always and a goal to be pursued in all kind of weather! Beautiful piece that clearly gives you away! Poetry is in your blood! 10+++ Keep it up, fighter! Love and Peace! Romeo from NYC.... (Report) Reply

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