A Fine Rhyme To Be Penned.......Soon Poem by Harriet James

A Fine Rhyme To Be Penned.......Soon



I've lost me sizzle factor
I've lost me sizzle factor
Maybe now I qualify
For X factor!

Just give me time
I've lost me rhyme
Love give me time
I must read me lines

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 August 2012

Horse hockey, Harriet! You've got the equation all wrong... It isn't the rhymin', the Timin'....or tone It's simply a MATTER of believing the Zone Of poetry never left your MIND This gift is forever, I speak the truth It's MIND over MATTER, The Factor forsooth! Fun write, young lady!

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Captain Cur 06 August 2012

Factoring Y in, sizzling Y X wins.

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