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Steven S
(8/13/2009 9:19:00 AM) |
This is the first poem of Patricia's that I have read.
I find that this poem is that kind of poem one would want in a book of poems. It is like a fine truffle in a box of truffles, you enjoy it so much as you consume it.
I like the way you mind works, Patricia.
Thanks.
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Susan Jarvis
(8/9/2009 12:21:00 AM) |
From the beguiling title to the closing line, this poem casts a fresh eye on the the philosophies of life, and all with innovative approach of an accomplished poet. I especially like; 'The beady darkness teems/With myriad uncharted voyages/
From you, the single port of entrance...' - beautiful! S :)
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Moon Batchelder
(8/5/2009 6:48:00 AM) |
stretched thin as quark crepe...with only a hint of deja vu to betray the myriad of life spans...deep and high thoughts...
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Afzal Shauq
(7/25/2009 10:28:00 AM) |
Every possible lifetime
That imagination might fancy
From birth to death; to live, to love,
sweet lines of your rich and meaningful poem..liked it.. the way you expresed in interesting too.. wonderful poem.10/10
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Patrick A. Martin
(7/19/2009 7:31:00 PM) |
Ah! now this is masterly Masterman. Sheer beauty. I love the thougt of all kinds of lives cascading through one life. Yes, yes, yes, you fabulous poet I am having visions of it as I read it again.
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Raj Arumugam
(7/15/2009 4:26:00 AM) |
the title 'a galaxy of one' is awesome...and the poem embraces the whole breadth and depth of life so convincingly...this is poetry.
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Yoonoos Peerbocus
(9/24/2007 8:07:00 PM) |
lovely piece....hidden world. nice to read..smooth flow.-thanks
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Frank James Ryan, Jr.
(9/24/2007 7:22:00 PM) |
I think i just had a close encounter with an awesome poem....Wait.............................Wooooooooooosh!
Yup...i did! lol! Excellent work young lady! Very inventive, and refreshingly surreal.
FjcR
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