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Greenwolfe 1962 (6/7/2008 5:00:00 PM)
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I read the other comments in hopes that someone knew what this poem was about, because I had no clue. As I understand from the others its supposed to be about angels. I read the poem a couple more times and all you need to do is
assume the angel reference is a metaphor and you've got a different poem. I suppose the others are right, but no one should ever have to spend any time
at all doing this. That's the obvious problem. I won't even mention any others.
That one is really big.I'll give it a 6.
GW62
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Ron Flowers (6/7/2008 7:39:00 AM)
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Alison, this poem was a pleasure to read.
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Jim Foulk (4/20/2007 1:21:00 PM)
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yes angels were here before God made the world, satan was in heaven at that time, before him and the other angels were thrown out of heaven after adam and eve sined. this was a great piece you wrote.
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Michael Gale (3/24/2007 4:09:00 PM)
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Duncan- I believe that perhaps the angels were created by God and arrived before the Big Bang theory or (the creation of the universe) .
The angels might have been created before and far away before the big bang
creation of the universe. Or the angels have been created and arrived before the end of the world and it's universe sending bad men and women into Hell with the Devil to be well baked. God bless all poets-MJG.
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Michael Gale (3/24/2007 3:57:00 PM)
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Great poem. An easy tenner. God bless all poets-MJG.
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Duncan Wyllie (3/20/2007 1:50:00 PM)
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Looking forward, with a positive message held within, This is great
Please excuse my ignorance but could you explain 'But arrived before well baked' not sure if I am familiar with this expression
Take care Alison, Love duncan X
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BEAU GOLDEN (3/19/2007 3:43:00 AM)
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delightfully written alison and we feel the emotion of endless possibilities for a bright new world.
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Jim Foulk (3/15/2007 12:55:00 PM)
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a very beautiful piece of poetry.
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Frank James Ryan, Jr. (3/12/2007 11:08:00 PM)
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Sorrowfully magnificient, my dear...The construction alone, smacks of mellifluousity
The storyline, unfortunately, is sadly as it is well delivered...Afine job indeed, lass.
F
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