Florida Angel

(Spring / Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach)

A Giver

A little girl I was When I met my first love
So pure, Intense… Not much I had to give
So much I had to fear,
Afraid of losing him, my only dear.

My heart, almost out of my mouth.
One day he kissed me with his tongue,
From loud heart beatings, to legs shaking,
Weird wet feelings.

Afraid of losing him and my mind,
He was pushed away,
What if he didn’t like it or worse,
What if he didn’t want me anymore?

He was my Prince,
So cute in Love, Loved me,
But I didn’t know that, I wasn’t sure...
I moved away, we moved on.

The little prince was the only one, innocent love,
Never to be replaced, never to be touched,
Forever embraced, the first of all.
A love without pretenses, pure love arbitration.

Submitted: Saturday, September 22, 2007
Edited: Monday, April 11, 2011

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  • Rookie - 154 Points Broken Peaces (9/29/2007 4:56:00 PM)

    Love in mind beauty in words pens were made for this, that well remembered kiss,
    you set a high standard Karina love Chris (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 154 Points Aaron Tate (9/26/2007 10:48:00 PM)

    Pure love is a good way to describe it, Truely this was written from the heart. I love it, keep it coming :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 465 Points Kee Thampi (9/23/2007 11:29:00 PM)

    Really a truthful write...
    My heart, almost out of my mouth.
    One day he kissed me with his tongue,
    From loud heart beatings, to legs shaking,
    Weird wet feelings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Chris Mendros (9/23/2007 10:49:00 PM)

    'From loud heart beatings, to legs shaking,
    Weird wet feelings.'
    for better or worse, we never forget the first.
    Honest, revealing. fit and memorable tribute. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Poison 9901 (9/23/2007 8:24:00 PM)

    Karina, as stated before me, this is very well written,
    A first love is never forgotten. Nor is expermenting with love
    Very tastefully written.
    'Keep on inking the Pages'
    Poison (Report) Reply

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