A Giver Poem by Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Florida Angel

Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach

A Giver



A little girl I was When I met my first love
So pure, Intense… Not much I had to give
So much I had to fear,
Afraid of losing him, my only dear.

My heart, almost out of my mouth.
One day he kissed me with his tongue,
From loud heart beatings, to legs shaking,
Weird wet feelings.

Afraid of losing him and my mind,
He was pushed away,
What if he didn’t like it or worse,
What if he didn’t want me anymore?

He was my Prince,
So cute in Love, Loved me,
But I didn’t know that, I wasn’t sure...
I moved away, we moved on.

The little prince was the only one, innocent love,
Never to be replaced, never to be touched,
Forever embraced, the first of all.
A love without pretenses, pure love arbitration.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 22 September 2007

Spoken in a true hearted fashion, well done...

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Poison 9901 23 September 2007

Karina, as stated before me, this is very well written, A first love is never forgotten. Nor is expermenting with love Very tastefully written. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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Chris Mendros 23 September 2007

'From loud heart beatings, to legs shaking, Weird wet feelings.' for better or worse, we never forget the first. Honest, revealing. fit and memorable tribute. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 03 October 2007

As first love never be lost, lkovely verse, wellpenned, thanks

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Broken Peaces 29 September 2007

Love in mind beauty in words pens were made for this, that well remembered kiss, you set a high standard Karina love Chris

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Ana Monnar 27 September 2007

First kiss, first love...most people remember it always. : -))

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Aaron Tate 26 September 2007

Pure love is a good way to describe it, Truely this was written from the heart. I love it, keep it coming :)

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Kee Thampi 23 September 2007

Really a truthful write... My heart, almost out of my mouth. One day he kissed me with his tongue, From loud heart beatings, to legs shaking, Weird wet feelings.

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Florida Angel

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Rio 40 Graus..Cidade Maravilha...Delray Beach
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