Into Abstract feeling
To love someone
And learn together
Hands to hold trusting
Jumping to the known
But as together unknown
Still certain of the action
Unexpected to jump
Still on hold
In trust to face
Whatever may come
As happy to be
Together on hold
Handlings fulfilled
A dream as a goal
Romance as charcoal...
Burst! ! ! !
Guess we'd never get anywhere without our dreams.....right Karina? ? ? took ten minutes to open up this poem and twenty to get to page..PH not functioning in my area. Had wondered about you for over a WEEK, but see you've been commenting lots.... nice poem here. marci.made.~~~
The last lline is interesting, especially when you ruminate an abstraction.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thanks for commenting on my poems, You are also a very great writer and i wish i could be you. take care, and keep on writing