Your words shall and will never flatter.
Instead of weakness You give power.
Your eyes will ever shine so brightly.
All that I see pays You courtesy.
All of the things You want, You maintain.
May You be pleased and let I remain
As a good poetry before You.
Hello Obed (You have a Beautiful Bible Name) Great Poem, this one... and yes, that is something to hope for... That our words, before God, should please Him... God Bless You, Kiddo... MoonBee
My style of writing and very down to earth message -A-
sweet and well done..the poems you added are good and meaningful too in your young age. I appreciate your talent and say.. just keeping penning and never stop writing..you are doing very well..your poem deserves 10/10
very good lines Obed...you convey your message very poetically...10
‘Your words shall and will never flatter. /Instead of weakness You give power….’ A Big and Tall yeah …prudent lines Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
flashes of expressive verses. remind me of Emily Dickinson's.