(October 18,1995 / Marikina City)

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A Good Poetry Before You

Your words shall and will never flatter.
Instead of weakness You give power.
Your eyes will ever shine so brightly.
All that I see pays You courtesy.
All of the things You want, You maintain.
May You be pleased and let I remain
As a good poetry before You.

Submitted: Tuesday, October 27, 2009
Edited: Wednesday, July 06, 2011

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  • Afzal Shauq (10/1/2010 5:06:00 AM)

    sweet and well done..the poems you added are good and meaningful too in your young age. I appreciate your talent and say.. just keeping penning and never stop writing..you are doing very well..your poem deserves 10/10

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  • Queeny Gona (6/2/2010 2:43:00 AM)

    Your words shall and will never flatter


    Wonderfull line obed,

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  • Kesav Easwaran (5/21/2010 5:15:00 AM)

    very good lines Obed...you convey your message very poetically...10

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/13/2010 10:38:00 AM)

    ‘Your words shall and will never flatter. /Instead of weakness You give power….’

    A Big and Tall yeah …prudent lines
    Voted 10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • palas kumar ray (1/21/2010 9:32:00 AM)

    Yeah, I don't have any different opinion at all.

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  • Srishti ds (12/15/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    good poetry indeed...

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  • Brishti Mazumdar (11/9/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    Obed, .....found a new side to look at a poetry......really liked it....

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  • Luwi Habte (11/7/2009 9:13:00 AM)

    Obed, this is so hilarious
    well penned...
    luwi

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  • john tiong chunghoo (11/5/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    love it Obed.Keep on writing.

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/1/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    fresh ideas all through-----

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