Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,127 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

A Government Graveyard - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Gathered in the graveyards
waiting for our own deaths
recesses called graves
waiting to take us

It's the life that poverty gave to us
the life the government
won't help us to get out of

Maybe it's time for a new hope
and a new government

Comments about A Government Graveyard by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (6/19/2014 2:30:00 PM)

    Yah i am inclined to agree with you, its very true and your poem is short yet it has pages of meaning (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 943 Points Stephen W (12/20/2013 4:07:00 PM)

    @Joe Breunig: rather naive, sir. The rich grow fat on government contracts. The condition of the poor depends on the attitude government takes.

    They trot out lots of lies
    To praise free enterprise.
    But all they really do
    Is steal from me and you.

    They give the state the blame,
    A rich rogue's lying game.
    No end to their demands
    When power's in their hands.

    The taxman grabs our dosh
    And gives it to the posh,
    Through contracts that are bent.
    We wonder where it went. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (10/28/2013 5:57:00 PM)

    Friend! you are right. a very realistic poem.
    It's the life that poverty gave to us
    the life the government
    won't help us to get out of (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/27/2013 1:29:00 AM)

    A hardhitting poetic political riot against d govt. Yor poem is great indeed n true.
    Pls do chk out my latest poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,739 Points David Wood (10/26/2013 6:37:00 AM)

    Out of the frying pan into the fire springs to mind. We in the UK do not seem to have politicians who are capable of running our country for anything other than their own aims and ambitions. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 877 Points marvin brato (10/21/2013 11:37:00 PM)

    Thought provoking... enlightens the mind! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,139 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/21/2013 10:26:00 AM)

    The grave - such a wonderful place
    No tax men or gangsters come calling
    Even If they do, they leave in such a haste
    Absolute peace be it sunny or snow falling
    The grave, the grave oh such a wonderful place.....

    (Good short poem sir - welcome to my page too) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,717 Points Valerie Dohren (10/19/2013 11:57:00 AM)

    I've just about given up on hope Dave, and as for a new government - they're all the same, aren't they? ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Shahzia Batool (10/17/2013 2:45:00 PM)

    This poem is applicable to many governments in many countries...what should i call it? a mild satire, or a wild one?
    but it is true! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,076 Points Wahab Abdul (10/17/2013 8:39:00 AM)

    ''the life the government
    won't help us to get out of'' these two lines give me another meaning....i love it what i understood by reading the two lines.....love your poem 10 marks.. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 950 Points Joe Breunig (10/15/2013 2:52:00 PM)

    An intriguing piece, but I don't agree with its basic premises; just because politicians suck on the government teat for their long and lackluster careers, it doesn't mean that thegovernment is responsible for the poverty/abundance of its citizenry; the government needs to protect its population, so that the talents of its people can grow and attain their futures through honest and diligent effort.

    -Joe Breunig,
    Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/15/2013 8:26:00 AM)

    through out the world same thing why/ yhis is the Question where we we are not mindless still we are cheated thank Alan (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (10/13/2013 4:07:00 PM)

    The government is the call of the people. When the two lose touch with each other it is called tyranny. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,718 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (10/13/2013 2:08:00 PM)

    Even the current government is an elected one. Is there any way the government may be made to listen to the citizens? A new government may have new problems which we do not know. I am only suggesting as another thought. The poem definitely brings the problem to attention. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,340 Points Ken E Hall (10/13/2013 5:09:00 AM)

    Many governments are useless regarding the working man...I believe Sweden look after their retired better than any place on the planet...In the UK anyone with pots of cash can still get the pension...Still the country is lovely but OZ has better sunshine cheers Dave (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (10/12/2013 8:39:00 PM)

    perhaps this poem speaks many truths. good read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,739 Points David Wood (10/12/2013 5:30:00 AM)

    People are truly suffering from this dreadful tax. Not only rent arrears but council tax arrears too, a double whammy (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 31, 2013

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