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A Heart Write

They said it couldn’t be done,
But I did it!
I bypassed hand and mind,
And wrote words with my heart!

Eyes closed, hands tied to rules,
Mind distraught,
The heart spilled ink on pages:
Its mind in control of my mind

Its will stronger than my will.
Heart’s hands - courageous-
Sinoatrial node’s
Ideas are materialized

By Aortal hands.

Copyright © 2009 Leslie Alexis

Submitted: Friday, April 30, 2010
Edited: Friday, January 20, 2012


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  • Ken E Hall (5/24/2010 4:03:00 AM)

    A heart write for sure and you can find your way just follow your heart,
    I know where you are going with this poem...enjoyed Regards

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (5/2/2010 10:42:00 PM)

    ’Its mind in control of my mind’
    Aha.
    My Mind [upper case] is under control of mind [lower case]
    Grosser coarse mind transformed in fine subtle Mind
    The unique expression…thanks Sir
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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