I say hi to everybody
When I start to depart!
It is when my sunflower
Kindly Tears me apart
My kindness is helpless
I have a helpless heart
(2008/8/16)
a warm heart for everyone........nice usage of word like sunflower...10
this injury to the heart has no medicine. the cure is.....to share another heart with someone special.nice piece bro.
A lovely read Shiraz! Your kindness seems to work, for everyone. But your sunflower it seems that she is In need - of more sun! *10*! ! Friend Thad
I liked it A LOT. a simple poem with the deep meaning. im sure its all a good poem needs. bravo
short..indeed...infact your heart must be quite strong...cos my one is all fragile...i m like down and out...wonder wen it's gona crack...thank nighingale 10+++ regards
ur heart is not helpless.. it is amazing! the poem is too and the poet as well! excellent work my friend
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
oh! I am touched by this poem........10