(05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

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A Hint At What Is Beautiful?

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who go out of their way
To nurse shrapnel scalded victims

Amidst napalm drugged air,
Carrying their humanity, quietly
And humbly, in our
Blood stained, greed diseased,
Hate eaten world.

Beautiful is the moment,
When the heart indifferent
To joy or sorrow, just trusts
Whatever this life brings
But finds time to just be.

Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007
Edited: Saturday, September 15, 2012


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  • Ketan Hukare (1/20/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    You r awesome
    Great write! !

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  • Matthias Pantaleon (11/6/2012 2:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,
    Offered to peace prone people

    Thank u for adding values to these words.
    Nice poem

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  • Cindirighandi S. (10/2/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful is this poem, thank you.

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  • Akanksha Bhatt (10/1/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    awesome! ! ! really i just love it! beautiflly written!

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  • Erka Wingo (9/20/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    I'm almost speechless. (And that's unusual for me) lol

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  • * Sunprincess * (8/25/2012 12:02:00 PM)

    even the idea expressed in the poem is beautiful.. :)

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  • Jay Ahmad (8/20/2012 3:25:00 PM)

    One word Phenomenal! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Shivani Gupta (8/20/2012 3:43:00 AM)

    I love this poem..so much depth woven into beautiful words..awesome..

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  • Harriet James (8/10/2012 5:20:00 PM)

    I see it in you and it is beautiful!

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  • Savita Tyagi (8/3/2012 9:53:00 PM)

    Absolutely beautiful! blessed is the one who sees such beauty.

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