yoonoos peerbocus

Bronze Star - 2,750 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Hint At What Is Beautiful? - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who offer what is real-themselves
To nurse with love and humility
napalm asphyxiated victims
in our stained world

veiling ambition with face of
humanity.Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
and heart shuts out desire to let in
consciousness.

Form: Blank Verse


Comments about A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos peerbocus

  • (11/23/2016 5:03:00 PM)


    (A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos paperbacks.)
    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,

    veiling ambition with face of
    humanity. Beautiful is the moment

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    **About the good, and the needs of humanity. A subject so enormous that the poet could only hint at it. A poem that is gorgeous in every aspect.
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  • (11/18/2016 4:31:00 PM)

    The Sky and its beauty
    Let the stars mingle in the evening sky to make us aware other worlds do exist yet to be discovered. (Report) Reply

  • Mark Sebert (9/30/2016 9:33:00 AM)

    Good message
    We need peace prone people, love the concept and the alliteration. Sometimes it is so hard to step out of the day to day and the mundane to lend a helping hand. (Report) Reply

  • Tapas Baidya (9/23/2016 6:38:00 AM)


    Beautiful. The poem speaks about love, peace... (Report) Reply

  • Tapas Baidya (9/23/2016 6:35:00 AM)


    বেশ লাগল । Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2016 4:42:00 AM)


    beautifully written poem (Report) Reply

  • Brenda Jensen (9/4/2016 12:24:00 PM)


    this write is beautiful as your soul that carries it and shares with us all (Report) Reply

  • Anitah Muwanguzi (7/31/2016 11:56:00 PM)


    Thanks for sharing something so positively inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Joel Aboderin (7/13/2016 11:32:00 AM)


    wrapped with gratitude...this poem is wrapped with good diction.Great (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (6/5/2016 10:13:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the 'thank you'...Wrapped with gratitude, ...Who go out of their way...To nurse shrapnel scalded victims.../..So...heartfelt...&....humane. (Report) Reply

  • Ravi Sathasivam (6/5/2016 7:39:00 AM)


    Excellent. Well penned. Sir. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (6/3/2016 5:25:00 AM)


    This is an amazing poem. Extremely beautifully and well written. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2016 1:09:00 AM)


    I imagine the ugliness and beauty found in war torn worlds. (Report) Reply

  • Nilima Deb (5/19/2016 6:03:00 AM)


    nice write.liked the thought designed with such lovely wording. (Report) Reply

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (4/20/2016 1:56:00 PM)


    A very nice poem, well expressed, of which I loved the last stanza the most. (Report) Reply

  • C. P. Sharma (4/6/2016 1:52:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the love
    The words its treasure trove
    World's hatred take away
    For peace pave the way

    You are a poet of peace
    Your poems are masterpiece
    (Report) Reply

  • Mann Bhatia (2/21/2016 12:58:00 PM)


    Just lovely.. Beauty (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (1/18/2016 5:06:00 AM)


    Beautiful is the 'Thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude
    Offered to peace prone people
    Who go out of their way
    to nurse sharpnel scalded victims.- - - -Oh beautiful indeed the poem and its message.
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  • Susan Williams (1/10/2016 2:49:00 PM)


    Powerful. Absolutely powerful. It is remarkable how many guises beauty dons during the course of life. Well done. Very well done (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2015 3:38:00 PM)


    beautiful is always beautiful...even it could be be-youth - ful (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 2, 2016


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