(05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

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A Child's reflection

Made homeless from home
Bombed city where though all
Extend arms, find it harder
To hold peace than explosives
In a napalmed land
As home bred exile I learn
To grow under a chemical sky

Dripping with nuclear fall outs
Flowing to other poison
Poured daily on earth and mind -
Today planet earth, tomorrow the stars.
How sad man who dreams of a home
In hereafter, can't share their warmth
To each other's heart, here and now..

Submitted: Friday, May 11, 2007
Edited: Wednesday, June 20, 2012


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  • Nikki Smith (11/9/2012 10:15:00 PM)

    Love it. It reminded me of world war II and all the air raids. Very nicely written

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  • Matthias Pantaleon (11/2/2012 9:48:00 PM)

    When a child grows with hostility he learn to find violence in the world.

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  • Erka Wingo (9/20/2012 10:47:00 AM)

    Oh my, what a sad truth and stark reality. So gracefully written and digs deep into you.

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  • * Sunprincess * (9/7/2012 3:15:00 PM)

    It is very sad we have our beautiful earth, but some would rather destroy it and others know this and are desperately seeking a new home asap.. :)

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  • Ade Renny Damayanti (8/4/2012 12:26:00 PM)

    its true and sad too...so touchy...i like the expression! ! !

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  • Mark Dillon (7/23/2012 10:52:00 AM)

    sad but true, it's a very troubled world we live in today, but where there's life there is hope.

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  • Mona Martinez (11/2/2010 1:05:00 PM)

    nicely expressed and sad.

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  • Herant A.. (3/16/2010 5:42:00 PM)

    Just Beautifull! !

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  • Sadaf Ambreen (3/4/2010 5:36:00 AM)

    Superb..
    Really heart touching..

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  • Ken E Hall (2/19/2010 3:44:00 PM)

    Always a great read..a sad tale as we speak weapons roll off the production lines
    for tomorrows wars. thanks for reflextion
    regards

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