(dedicated to Musica Viva Australia)
a river full of hopes
we fly peaceful flags
let your song be delicate
water can hear singing night
beauty imposes reverence in star
hear joyful tune in Summer dew
quietly as honey buds she goes far
leaves our souls with longing view
loves come so eloquently
sparkles in all earth and skies
slow waltzes enter tenderly
spirit of light beautify our hearts
(inspired by Vincent van Gogh's Starry Night Over the Rhone)
wonderful write...lovely vision on love...great imagination...very pleasing to heart, mind and spirit..inspiring piece on faith, hope and love...10+++++
Wonderful poem. The line loves come so eloquently change to: Love comes so elequently
Simple single lines stringing more hormonious....yours this talent I hope I too get into sometime....congrats
Nice flow and movement..a river of hopes much more than hope..I like.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The Star's love magic lingers on in your poem! Nice!