Unwritten Soul

A Light Through Your Heart - Poem by Unwritten Soul

I see a light
A light through your heart
The special heart glows in the dark
Warm me with your melodious heartbeat tonight
Sweetly kill the quietness of the night
Come and inspire me for a of song
A song of love with sound of heartbeat
Could you stay a while
Help me finish the song for you
With the hope we still together for long
So i have a chance to sing you
A song of a every night
My love song

Comments about A Light Through Your Heart by Unwritten Soul

  • (6/11/2016 11:17:00 AM)

    for a of song....................why this usage..............what does it mean? (Report) Reply

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  • (6/11/2016 11:16:00 AM)

    Deeply touching one. Deeper meanings than the apparent words I see. Very touching one.........Help me finish the song for you......................The special heart..................oh very deep undertones and very very thought provoking images it sketches. (Report) Reply

  • Mihaela Pirjol (6/8/2016 8:15:00 AM)

    This is a tender invocation of the muse, or a romantic calling of the beloved. Which ever it is, made this poem - Fantastic! (Report) Reply

  • Christopher Tye (6/2/2016 8:33:00 AM)

    Wonderfully written as always. Love can illuminate even the darkest of hearts. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (6/2/2016 3:29:00 AM)

    Come and inspire me for a of song
    A song of love with sound of heartbeat
    Could you stay a while............ i shall sing to you, to my hearts content....... thank you for this wonderful, emotional love poem . tony
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  • (5/9/2016 9:17:00 AM)

    This is the shortest of the three I've read this afternoon, but no worse for that. There is the gentle sound of a heartbeat echoing through your work and find it irresistible as poetry. by the way do you write French verse too?
    Tom billsborough
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    Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/10/2016 12:14:00 AM)

    Im still self learning French a lil bit hahaha, i love to learn it. Eventhough i feel sorry for my English hahahaha..Thank you Tom, this is by far was my fastest work i ve done in 10-15mins where that time i was got hit by the words in my brain again and again hahahaha. Thanks again Tom

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/22/2015 7:37:00 AM)

    Come and inspire me for a of song
    A song of love with sound of heartbeat
    Could you stay a while
    Help me finish the song for you. i liked these expressions in your poem. thank you.
    (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (8/27/2014 3:01:00 AM)

    A beautifuuly written a romantic song what I loved for it's simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (5/8/2014 1:42:00 AM)

    Beautifully written by a romantic Soul who puts his heart to all that he does bringing light through to all. Thank You Soul (Report) Reply

  • Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/4/2014 3:31:00 AM)

    this poem flowed like a river...good strong writing (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/4/2014 11:25:00 PM)

    ......a touching write.really romantic and wonderfully composed........ (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das (3/11/2014 8:30:00 PM)

    Wonderful write.................... (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 8:25:00 AM)

    Beautiful and touching poem..Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • (6/12/2013 6:13:00 PM)

    can you stay for a while, so i have a chance to sing you.. a love song
    very beautiful and touched
    really love it
    (Report) Reply

  • (3/27/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    Thoughts of beautiful love enough words to tell a thousand stories from a well written soul, a feel good beauty...regards (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/9/2013 9:07:00 AM)

    Enchanting poem, romantic and beautifully written. (Report) Reply

  • Colin Bradley (1/1/2013 6:14:00 PM)

    my favourite poem im ss when it comes to love poems (Report) Reply

  • Poetheart Morgan (12/13/2012 7:37:00 AM)

    His poem, so simple and romantic that seems addressed to anyone reading. That's how I feel. Muito lindo. (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Honeytip (11/21/2012 2:16:00 PM)

    Nawww....so sweet: -)
    Straight from the heart [3
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  • (11/2/2012 4:18:00 AM)

    Vedi che la cosa è reciproca (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 6, 2013

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