Unwritten Soul


A Letter In The Wind


Yellow foliage fallen on my hands
Remind me, they once were green
Reminisce me to our beautiful time
Standing here, witnessing running days
Flying and leaving that moment away
Soon days changing another season,
But I know our time wont be faded away
Even it only just golden past days

Encarved smiles by those memories
Haunting clock ticking, bringing old times,
Staying alive, In a distance of silence
Presently living between our breaths
Far by the oceans, across the lands
Two minds bind to different poles of hearts
Between us, joining two souls, you and me
The only junction connecting us over the sea
Maybe i am only the one who counting
Upon the days till you are here, return
Chasing the time toward the end
To over the season of waiting

Since you been gone,
Day by day I'm living with the sky
Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night
Your last promise to return, I am undone the last bye
I shall await, await for your shadow to tell me you're back
But spring has losing it flowers, and leaves about to leave
Evening breeze of autumn, I still living with the sunset sky
It could be another day of waiting, but i am loyal to stay
So in each breathe i take in, my soul write my words
Chaining word by word, embroidered with my prayers
A single hush flying with a letter from my all
Swifting free, those are my letters in the wind

Wandering in this shared world atmosphere
Bird singing over the melodies, tunes of harmony
Singing verses of secret letter hidden in the wind
Encompassed by your magnetic heart, it will find
From a single hush traveled to be in your breathing
May it'll be revealed when reach to heart then your mind
A letter to words then completing the meaning
Binding to your mind of what i am here telling
My whispering soul to you, if you wondering

Below the stars, the shining sparks
Sometimes i feel someone is remembering me
Could it be a reply for me, my letter in the wind?
Take nothing for granted, the only thing i honestly mean
Only praying for you having all great life and things
Maybe this waiting is not going to end
But my prayers will never stop to send
And the letters will be continuously written
In each of my breathing, every second
Till the last breath of my life

Stand here, watching how green turn yellow
and that's how it was our beautiful time
For life has time with mystery flow
Remind you never be low, just go
Trust all things within you
Be strong whatever you do
I am not be there but the wind will
Carrying a letter for you
from me till end of my time


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The alternate title for this poem is called 'Une lettre dans le vent'. Taking many times before posting this poem, then i done two artworks for it one is called Autumn on my skin, and Eternal spring. Written for a far relative, my french teacher, my friend that i always enjoyed together in thick and thin, start written when my nice buddy had to go to work in Algeria, for few months. I am just hoping you doing well and always be strong and be happy, my best far relative and friend_Unwritten Soul

Submitted: Thursday, October 25, 2012
Edited: Saturday, December 08, 2012

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  • Rookie - 773 Points Ken E Hall (7/3/2013 12:27:00 AM)

    Luvli poem indeed 'from me till end of my time, luvli all the way thru will read many times...excuse the luvli spelling its Yorkshire slang! which is said with deep meaning. regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Jahan Zeb (12/14/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    Looking the same sun, hope it warming you
    Staring the moon bright, hope it shelters your night.

    This is undoubtedly a spectacular write and I enjoyed it very very much. I liked the thought in every part of this artistic piece. The best thing I saw and read in this piece is the wonderful imagination in it. the idea of getting sunlight from the sun looking at the moon for it is sheltering your friend.

    But you know I got relief to see that you do have a friend. Marvelous. Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 629 Points Tony Karas (12/11/2012 7:36:00 AM)

    Awesomely beautiful! A sure fire 10 if it would only let me enter ratings. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Vipins Puthooran (11/30/2012 3:42:00 AM)

    [a feeling of melancholy, shows intense and absolute love of companionship]
    Great poem my soul.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (11/29/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    A remarkable letter that speaks a lot dear WRITTEN SOUL. Poetry of this kind becomes a rare contribution and the elaboration upon the feelings conveyed has added to the own strength of this pleasantly long poem. A good work sir. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Star Crossed Lady (11/28/2012 10:27:00 AM)

    I very much enjoyed reading this poem and reliving the wonderful memories I thought buried forever. Thank you. And i look forward to the book. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Mehraneh Hosseini (11/26/2012 11:07:00 AM)

    Oh my friend, I always try to find my best line in a poem, but honestly I could not find any here.ALL of them are my best.I read it deeply more than once.You always write impressive but this one is awesome and it even makes the situation harder for you, because the next one should be more than awesome: p
    One of my country poets Fereydoon Moshiri wrote a poem Bi to Mahtab(in Persian) Or Without you moonlight I suggest you to read this poem(Its one of the best poems, that I have ever read!) , I don't know its translation is as well as the persian one but it is worth.
    Hope to read more & more of you: p: p: p (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sun Shine (11/26/2012 6:28:00 AM)

    Missing element is there, which is expressed in words!
    peak of emotions.
    Through the words one can feel the situation.every line has its own beauty.
    lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Ketan Hukare (11/25/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    An exceptionally well written and composed poem.
    Awesome.....................
    ....................Please share more (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kelly Seale (11/24/2012 10:01:00 AM)

    Beautifully written. Each words chosen reaches out, beyond time and space, beyond distance, beyond geography... and pulls him home, into your awaiting arms... Outstanding Ink Soul...; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points So Close (11/24/2012 1:22:00 AM)

    its pretty fantastic....! ! the lines
    Far by the oceans, across the lands
    Two minds bound to different poles of heart i do enjoyed a lot! lets hope a great future to your friend and also god will bind you together later....
    good work.

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 709 Points Gulsher John (11/22/2012 8:40:00 AM)

    poignant
    artistically structured all the passions of lost love
    if read this poem few years back certainly it would make me cry
    the written soul wrote her soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (11/18/2012 1:22:00 PM)

    Aha Soul, flying high..... Really a superb write... Emotionally charged... Every word is full of hope mixed with sorrow... Seasons change n V wait for some incomplete promises... Though giving us a new world to live in but still makes us stranger to our sounding... I wish ur friend come back to U!
    S-Jan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 258 Points Shahzia Batool (11/12/2012 10:26:00 AM)

    Be strong whatever you do
    I am not be there but the wind will
    Carrying a letter for you
    from me till end of my time
    The poem offered a good read, and the poet's notes enhanced its beauty...a heart-felt dedication... (Report) Reply

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