Unwritten Soul


Forgive You - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Forgive you
It is not hard to forgive you
Transparent heart, i know who are you
It is okay to forgive you
Need no reason, just forgive you

Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
Hates can stab me, please not to you
You innocent in the eyes of anger
Truth will be seen a bit longer
Never mind how deep you cut my skin
Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
I just can't hate you
Everything u do, forgive you

I need to save you from dark
So just give me all your pain
Cleanse your suffering marks
I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain

Then, when a chance came to me
Finally i have to leave you
Doesn't mean grudge buried me
But no chance to tell you
When truth comes tell everything
Don't feel regret or bad feeling
I told you, i forgive you
But now forgive me for leaving you
Only one thing i want you always do
Smile as sincere u can do
We still friend, promise you, i do..
Forgave you, now Forgive me

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the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition

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Comments about Forgive You by Unwritten Soul

  • Diane Montemayor Diane Montemayor (6/12/2016 9:04:00 AM)

    Dear Sir,

    Forgiveness, we do this not just to forgive them but a way to moving on.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Sincerely ,
    Diane (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (5/18/2016 6:07:00 AM)

    Never mind how deep you cut my skin
    Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
    I just can't hate you
    Everything u do, forgive you............ in the poets notes you wrote how our ego blinds us....... that is a beautiful thought.......... forgiving is a divine abilty. when you forgive, God lives in you dear poetess. tony (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (5/13/2016 10:02:00 AM)

    Forgiveness! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (3/9/2016 11:50:00 PM)

    Though written in a personal tone, the poem has universal appeal.Forgiveness like kindness is one of the most beautiful attributes of a person.It heals the wounds and binds the souls.Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu Elena Sandu (3/7/2016 10:42:00 PM)

    Powerful poem! I shall find a way to forgive also. Sigh, If we could have a vacuum to take out all the pain, to have a span and spick soul again.. (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman Simone Inez Harriman (3/3/2016 10:45:00 AM)

    Such lovely words:

    'Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
    Hates can stab me, please not to you
    You innocent in the eyes of anger
    Truth will be seen a bit longer'

    So wisely said......10 (Report) Reply

  • Umar Hashmi Umar Hashmi (11/21/2015 9:03:00 AM)

    It's better to forgive and forget........... (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (5/31/2015 8:06:00 AM)

    The divine forgiveness is always there if someone is ready to ask sorry by admitting the blender happened. But it is sad to note that such a great value is diminishing in the society. I feel this poem opens up the eyes and make humans to say, simple sorry when someone is hurt by his or her attitude. I give 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Jitesh Shah Jitesh Shah (4/5/2015 10:48:00 AM)

    very nice and i like your poem and also read my poems (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (11/13/2014 9:10:00 PM)

    So nicely you said here, yes forgiveness is the best and most difficult quality to attain. Once it is attained the divinity is felt. (Report) Reply

  • Clarence Prince Clarence Prince (11/3/2014 2:41:00 PM)

    Yes, forgiveness is one of the keys to righteousness! Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (6/29/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    I need to save you from dark
    So just give me all your pain
    Cleanse your suffering marks
    I'll wipe away your trouble not to
    stain (Report) Reply

  • Pradip Dasgupta (4/15/2013 5:21:00 PM)

    worderful.love ur poem. (Report) Reply

  • Frank James Davis (4/8/2013 7:09:00 PM)

    Forgiveness heals!
    Truly lovely sentiments, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Kanav Justa Kanav Justa (12/13/2012 4:08:00 AM)

    forgiving someone is so damn hard, , , , specially when someone keeps doing the same thing again and again, , , that you hate, , , sometimes they are not even sorry for what they do, , , they justify it with some excuse, , , they never look the otherside, , , how there actions may affect others (Report) Reply

  • Lola Montez (11/2/2012 4:16:00 AM)

    Vedi che la cosa è reciproca (Report) Reply

  • Dominic Hontonnu Dominic Hontonnu (6/26/2012 6:37:00 AM)

    Hummm
    This is it
    S¯_??O??????? simple and love it
    As for me yoou r forgiven (Report) Reply

  • Kaila George Kaila George (6/19/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    Forgive is not as easy as it looks, your penmenship is remarkable, love how it flows from on to the next. look forward to reading the rest. (Report) Reply

  • Rain ... (6/10/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    Oh my god.......i have no words to describe.....i love each and every line.......
    hats off to u.....

    -Rain... (Report) Reply

  • Elena Sandu Elena Sandu (5/14/2012 10:50:00 PM)

    Yes! I love this poem's kindness, forgiveness, wisely taught. An inspiration for any loving heart, thank you! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011


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