Unwritten Soul


Forgive you


Forgive you
It is not hard to forgive you
Transparent heart, i know who are you
It is okay to forgive you
Need no reason, just forgive you

Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
Hates can stab me, please not to you
You innocent in the eyes of anger
Truth will be seen a bit longer
Never mind how deep you cut my skin
Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
I just can't hate you
Everything u do, forgive you

I need to save you from dark
So just give me all your pain
Cleanse your suffering marks
I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain

Then, when a chance came to me
Finally i have to leave you
Doesn't mean grudge buried me
But no chance to tell you
When truth comes tell everything
Don't feel regret or bad feeling
I told you, i forgive you
But now forgive me for leaving you
Only one thing i want you always do
Smile as sincere u can do
We still friend, promise you, i do..
Forgave you, now Forgive me

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the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition

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Submitted: Saturday, August 07, 2010
Edited: Friday, September 09, 2011

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  • Bronze Star - 5,755 Points Amitava Sur (11/13/2014 9:10:00 PM)

    So nicely you said here, yes forgiveness is the best and most difficult quality to attain. Once it is attained the divinity is felt. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,594 Points Ramesh Rai (6/29/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    I need to save you from dark
    So just give me all your pain
    Cleanse your suffering marks
    I'll wipe away your trouble not to
    stain (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,035 Points Kanav Justa (12/13/2012 4:08:00 AM)

    forgiving someone is so damn hard, , , , specially when someone keeps doing the same thing again and again, , , that you hate, , , sometimes they are not even sorry for what they do, , , they justify it with some excuse, , , they never look the otherside, , , how there actions may affect others (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,018 Points * Sunprincess * (9/22/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    I forgive you is the easiest thing to say, but for some people
    it is the hardest thing to do. They prefer to hold onto ther anger,
    which means they were never your friend in the first place..
    excellent write by the way.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 502 Points Kaila George (6/19/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    Forgive is not as easy as it looks, your penmenship is remarkable, love how it flows from on to the next. look forward to reading the rest. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Rain ... (6/10/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    Oh my god.......i have no words to describe.....i love each and every line.......
    hats off to u.....

    -Rain... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,053 Points Elena Sandu (5/14/2012 10:50:00 PM)

    Yes! I love this poem's kindness, forgiveness, wisely taught. An inspiration for any loving heart, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/25/2012 3:18:00 AM)

    Thanks for your comment on my poem, 'I want To Be Raped'

    '...Need no reason, just forgive you...' Its the right attitude to forgive...very emphatic poem...deep from heart [suffering]..without any ifs and but...enjoyed it...~ niv Tenner

    PS Read mine Sister Don't Give Me Opiate [Drama In Real Life]

    Smiling at you :) ~ n (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/25/2012 9:02:00 AM)

    wonderful poem... well, while reading i thought about people who had offended me... and i have forgiven somebody but the others...i think yes i did it but i rememberer the pain they`ve done not to me but another people. well, i think about their forgiveness :) great poem, thanks) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonali Sings (11/1/2011 7:39:00 AM)

    A very touching poem. Forgiveness is divine and a loving heart is only capable of doing such deed.
    Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,426 Points Dave Walker (9/20/2011 5:03:00 AM)

    To forgive is hard. But not to forgive can
    Be even harder. Great poem my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 141 Points Stan Petrovich (9/8/2011 2:36:00 PM)

    I can forgive any man his deeds and even his shortcomings, but I do not care for inexcusable errors by 'poets' who pretend to be what they are not. Good feelings, but only a 2.0... (Report) Reply

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