Unwritten Soul

Forgive You - Poem by Unwritten Soul

Forgive you
It is not hard to forgive you
Transparent heart, i know who are you
It is okay to forgive you
Need no reason, just forgive you

Pains u gave me, smiles i give you
Hates can stab me, please not to you
You innocent in the eyes of anger
Truth will be seen a bit longer
Never mind how deep you cut my skin
Never mind how bloody heart i felt in
I just can't hate you
Everything u do, forgive you

I need to save you from dark
So just give me all your pain
Cleanse your suffering marks
I'll wipe away your trouble not to stain

Then, when a chance came to me
Finally i have to leave you
Doesn't mean grudge buried me
But no chance to tell you
When truth comes tell everything
Don't feel regret or bad feeling
I told you, i forgive you
But now forgive me for leaving you
Only one thing i want you always do
Smile as sincere u can do
We still friend, promise you, i do..
Forgave you, now Forgive me

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the inspiration by people and imagination Don't shy to say
sorry, don't feel difficult to forgive..the ego only kill the
beauty of life In everything we do, don't let emotion enclose intuition

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Comments about Forgive You by Unwritten Soul

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (5/31/2015 8:06:00 AM)

    The divine forgiveness is always there if someone is ready to ask sorry by admitting the blender happened. But it is sad to note that such a great value is diminishing in the society. I feel this poem opens up the eyes and make humans to say, simple sorry when someone is hurt by his or her attitude. I give 10+ (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 875 Points Jitesh Shah (4/5/2015 10:48:00 AM)

    very nice and i like your poem and also read my poems (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,631 Points Amitava Sur (11/13/2014 9:10:00 PM)

    So nicely you said here, yes forgiveness is the best and most difficult quality to attain. Once it is attained the divinity is felt. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,380 Points Clarence Prince (11/3/2014 2:41:00 PM)

    Yes, forgiveness is one of the keys to righteousness! Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,219 Points Ramesh Rai (6/29/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    I need to save you from dark
    So just give me all your pain
    Cleanse your suffering marks
    I'll wipe away your trouble not to
    stain (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 242 Points Pradip Dasgupta (4/15/2013 5:21:00 PM)

    worderful.love ur poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (4/8/2013 7:09:00 PM)

    Forgiveness heals!
    Truly lovely sentiments, Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (12/13/2012 4:08:00 AM)

    forgiving someone is so damn hard, , , , specially when someone keeps doing the same thing again and again, , , that you hate, , , sometimes they are not even sorry for what they do, , , they justify it with some excuse, , , they never look the otherside, , , how there actions may affect others (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lola Montez (11/2/2012 4:16:00 AM)

    Vedi che la cosa è reciproca (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,672 Points * Sunprincess * (9/22/2012 8:07:00 AM)

    I forgive you is the easiest thing to say, but for some people
    it is the hardest thing to do. They prefer to hold onto ther anger,
    which means they were never your friend in the first place..
    excellent write by the way.. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dominic Hontonnu (6/26/2012 6:37:00 AM)

    This is it
    S¯_??O??????? simple and love it
    As for me yoou r forgiven (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 885 Points Kaila George (6/19/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    Forgive is not as easy as it looks, your penmenship is remarkable, love how it flows from on to the next. look forward to reading the rest. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 204 Points Rain ... (6/10/2012 9:54:00 AM)

    Oh my god.......i have no words to describe.....i love each and every line.......
    hats off to u.....

    -Rain... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,428 Points Elena Sandu (5/14/2012 10:50:00 PM)

    Yes! I love this poem's kindness, forgiveness, wisely taught. An inspiration for any loving heart, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (4/25/2012 3:18:00 AM)

    Thanks for your comment on my poem, 'I want To Be Raped'

    '...Need no reason, just forgive you...' Its the right attitude to forgive...very emphatic poem...deep from heart [suffering]..without any ifs and but...enjoyed it...~ niv Tenner

    PS Read mine Sister Don't Give Me Opiate [Drama In Real Life]

    Smiling at you :) ~ n (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Sanu Puthupallil (4/6/2012 7:15:00 AM)

    NICE POEM.....GREAT... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Apeksha Kumar (3/13/2012 5:47:00 AM)

    awwesome indeed! ! you really do a great job! all the best! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 357 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/25/2012 9:02:00 AM)

    wonderful poem... well, while reading i thought about people who had offended me... and i have forgiven somebody but the others...i think yes i did it but i rememberer the pain they`ve done not to me but another people. well, i think about their forgiveness :) great poem, thanks) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sonali Sings (11/1/2011 7:39:00 AM)

    A very touching poem. Forgiveness is divine and a loving heart is only capable of doing such deed.
    Wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 48 Points Fragments Of Light And Love (10/22/2011 7:08:00 PM)

    this is a sincere and and from the heart...you really write with your very soul...tnx for this... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 7, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, September 9, 2011

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