MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Rookie - 175 Points (11/07/1975 / Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines)

A Love Song For You - Poem by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

A LOVE SONG FOR YOU
Melvin Banggollay


I can't sing you a song
Full of burning passion
but my humble heart can
make a beat with my pen.

My eyes can never lie
The love my heart smile
For my heart can't deny
I loved you till I will die.

True love this can be
as I'm thinking of thee
even I tried to forget thee
Your face I always see.

Your smile is my joy
Your laughters I enjoy
The charm you employ
Inspired this lonely boy.

You are my love song
that cheers my heart
and I can't sing a song
If you're not in my heart.


Comments about A Love Song For You by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

  • Rookie - 120 Points Maia Padua (7/30/2009 9:53:00 PM)

    a wonderful write...like a soft feather touching my heart..
    i love this...very fine ans soft-flowing
    lines are so captivating..the thoughts are so sweet...
    10++

    lovelots,
    Maia (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/13/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    amazing write sir.. imagery is full in this one! and as well as emotion.. the harana is lovely indeed =) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Kesav Easwaran (1/25/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    good love song this...brings out fully the sweet thirst inside a loving mind...the last two lines are really good, Melvin...congrats...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (5/21/2008 10:39:00 PM)

    Lovely my friend, clear and fully flowing expression of emotion.

    Well composed and thought out Melvin..

    best wishes
    Jon (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 14, 2009


[Hata Bildir]