MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

Rookie - 175 Points (11/07/1975 / Natonin, Mountain Province, Philippines)

A Breath Without A Life - Poem by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

We need to breath to live
to see the the birds to fly
To feel the wind to leave
To let our dreams go by
but when we love no more
and heart's closed its door,
We breath without a life
No joy to heal life's strife.

We need to love and care
And show the joy of life
to those who need a cheer
To those who lived in strife
To those who need a care
and thirst a love so bless
that we can share our best
and meaning of life's quest.


Comments about A Breath Without A Life by MELVIN BANGGOLLAY

  • Veteran Poet - 1,698 Points Elena Sandu (9/19/2013 9:18:00 AM)

    Great truth spoken here, a broken heart could be healed by taking care of those in need. Thank you! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (5/13/2009 9:37:00 PM)

    This piece of work is true, meaningful, believable, full of imagery, very creative indeed. Each line runs smoothly and flawless. Using simple words letting simple reader to understand what the author meant. I'll add to that: the author is talented. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/8/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    Very nice and lovely poem.10 with love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Trusting You* (4/5/2009 6:12:00 PM)

    but when we love no more
    and heart's closed its door,
    We breath without a life
    so true... this is so good because it is so true and not everyone knows this.. its something to pass on to our kids... good job.
    Becca (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pratisha Karki (1/26/2009 11:17:00 PM)

    Great Poem. Melvin your poem is as beautiful as your thought. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,775 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/26/2008 9:40:00 PM)

    And if only we could convince even 1/3 of mortal earth, to exercise this as their life's mantra....what a far more peaceful world....we would pass to our children!
    Very fine work..ROCK-ON!

    fjr
    ** (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (10/26/2008 9:16:00 AM)

    sharing love is sharing life and sharing life is breathing life...well said, Melvin...thanks for 'sharing'...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (10/15/2008 5:15:00 AM)

    true lines springing forth from the inner mines (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Karima Astrid P (10/14/2008 9:29:00 PM)

    this is so true..
    nice poem by the way (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 411 Points Ency Bearis (10/13/2008 2:07:00 AM)

    truth of write to dare...thanks for sharing...

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 13, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2014


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