A Memories Passer Poem by Farah Anasmosa

A Memories Passer

Rating: 4.6


Once the memories created
It will never fade away
Whether it is precious
Or as bitter as death

Once the memories created
The feels you've felt won't go
It lives along with the future
It stays forever

Once the memories created
You will never know
When it will come to an end
And you will never want to let go

Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fabrizio Frosini 17 November 2015

unfortunately, also the strongest and most 'precious' memories can fade away.. but till they are there (with us, rooted deep in our mind) , they can give us warmth and help us going on.. Thanks for sharing, Farah, and.. welcome at PH! Cheers

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

Memories, good or bad, once created in an individual's mind, do linger there for a short or long span depending on the intensity of the instance/ object of memory. However, since time is the healer of all wounds it acts as a catalyst helping one's memories to gradually fade away. In addition, forgetfulness is the boon bestowed on human beings that helps in this stupendous task. Well crafted poem. Thanks for sharing.9 points.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 November 2015

The poem itself is creative of a memory, the reader can't forget this lovely poem........................10

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 November 2015

Beautifully done. Flowing smooth and simple. Keep inking.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 December 2015

Well conceived, well articulated poem.

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Saidi Muhd 19 December 2015

touched with your writing: ')

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Hans Vr 14 December 2015

Lovely written poem. Deep thought on memories that will not fade. Surely the memories of our most emotional moments are carved in our minds as if they were carved in stone. However the bitterness of some of these memories does fade with time and reasoning. If the memory of a person we lost, the extremely bitter feeling of having lost, is often with time replaced by a loving feeling of gratefulness for having had, even though the feeling of missing the person is never completely gone. Really thought provoking poem. Well done

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Kelly Kurt 17 November 2015

Nicely conceived and written. Thanks, Farah

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Souren Mondal 17 November 2015

'Once the memories created You will never know When it will come to an end And you will never want to let go' Yes, memories are very difficult to let go, but eventually, they lose the same flair of impacting us the way they did us in the past... A very nice poem Farah.. Thanks for sharing..

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