The rays have brought your message
Piercing through my closed window
I can read a golden hued line
'I'll be yours, all my life'
Copyright: DrNikhat Bano
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these are four lines about a deep, passionate love of a person, who happens to see his/her lover even in the sun rays.
Love's message written on sunlight- -So vast and so strong an emotion compressed in such few words- -Thanks for sharing.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day.
Through rays of sun A heart of gold Congratulations on Poem Of The Day. Most deserved.
Welcome to this august Forum, Dr. Nikhat Bano, along with an outstanding poem. The message is as soft and delicate as the beatings of a lover's heart. Thanks for sharing.
Simply superb, imagery and style of expression. Congrats on poem of the Day.
Reading a golden hued line is amazing through vision of mind uniting with light of wisdom that comes up to us. Piercing through window this Divine light rays come as grace of God. We feel these rays with due love. Love for God is eternal and love of God is eternal. An excellent poem is very well penned.10.....Congratulations!
Undefeatable, undeniable and unchallenged power of love. It can penetrate any enclosure. Wonderfully crafted poem. Congrats for gaining the well deserved acknowledgement. Thanks for sharing. X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Passionate piece of poetry elegantly encapsulated from the heart with conviction. Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing Nikhat.