maria sudibyo

Veteran Poet - 1,069 Points (280883 / parist van java)

A Place For Me - Poem by maria sudibyo

is there a place for me
in this shrunken world I see
may it be the last
may it be the best
I can swear my words

far, far
I've brought my feet for thousand miles
long, long
I search something even I can't understand

is there someone else
I can care like I love myself
may it never end
though could be it wrong
I would share my soul

far, far
I've brought my feet another thousand miles
long, long
I keep searching something I can't understand


Comments about A Place For Me by maria sudibyo

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/19/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    Nice poem, Maria...... Keep on searching and writing. There is a place for everyone in this small world. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Blue Eyes (1/7/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    very nice poem i like it a lot and, i know u r not that u r not the Maria of my poem, anyway, i am sure u look nice too, thx for the comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (1/7/2009 9:57:00 PM)

    i like the carry on of thoughts in the second and last stanza reinfor es the title and message, indeed we all search long and far to find our right place, great philosepy and write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 7, 2009



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