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A Poem Lost

As I lay in my bed, unable to sleep
I composed a good poem I wanted to keep;
It kept going round and around in my head
(I should have been bothered to write it all down)
But decided, by rote, to remember instead.

Once honed, I repeated, lest I should forget
It felt so secure in my mind there, and yet
Time and again I have made this mistake
I should have got up, or at least stayed awake.

In spite of persisting I was not receiving
No matter my anger, there was no retrieving
And so, after all, I now know to my cost
This delicate whisper,
This poem, is lost.

Submitted: Thursday, October 11, 2012
Edited: Friday, October 12, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Exactly what happened a few nights ago - and I'm still annoyed with myself.
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(Written Oct 2012)

Comments about this poem (A Poem Lost by John Carter Brown )

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  • Smoky Hoss (12/22/2012 10:52:00 AM)

    You have spoken so well and true for so many of us. It is so frustrating, but it is good to realize I am not the only one; thanks John!

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  • Brian Caffrey (11/23/2012 2:31:00 PM)

    I know the feeling I too have poems lost, but now I carry a notepad with me even to bed...just in case! !

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  • Constance K Yost (11/2/2012 3:13:00 PM)

    I think I may have enjoyed that one, John. Maybe you will remember it another time. Thanks for the great comments.

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  • Asif Andalib (10/16/2012 4:59:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. It happened to me also.

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