This haunts my sleep
It burns out smiles, assuaging nothing as it does so.
Feeding my depression and fanning the flames of my heartache.
Can't you tell me that everything will be alright?
That I have made stupid mistakes
But that you will love me anyways
Will be healed of my hurt.
I'm still waiting your answer
Until then I hear nothing
No empty words looking like lies
I see nothing
Not the reflection of my dark eyes in yours
I feel nothing
No sinful caress of the skin
Nothing but the beating in my heart
and the throbbing of my head
Everything, next to kills me
Everything says you've moved on
And that you don't want me.
Tell me is this true?
You know I didn't lie
When I said I would die for you
and I would never want to hurt you.
You are my one true love
and the light in my soul
So please, darling please
Please come back,
...
Please?
'I see nothing Not the reflection of my dark eyes in yours'... beautiful line which says it all...great work
touching. I also liked the line about the reflection of your eyes. beautiful imagery. on another note: YOU TOOK AWAY ALL OF YOUR OTHER POEMS.: ( i guess it's just time to start anew. also, could you post a translation of your bio cuz i'm really curious about what it says. and, what is clavespada? i tried translating your new name but the website didn't know what clavespada was. plz? for all us non-bilingual people? : P
wow this is a really good poem. It's sad when we love someone who doesn't love us back. Or when that person just doesn't love us anymore. This was beautifully written. I hope your heart heals.
Very impressive! A powerful and moving write that clearly gives you away! I love the flow and rich imagery embedded on it! Even through pain we can find the courage to let it all out of our hearts and mind and this is a good example! I like it! 10+++ Well deserved! Keep inspiring the World with more such thought provoking writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
Yeah, really depicted one, who's sick cos his love is leaving him in despair, nice work,
this is such a great poem, u can feel the heartache
I always think about what you'll write next... And everytime I can relate to it... It was a great read, and I'd love to read more. But, I have to say, I've thought a lot about you lately... -Trysta
such a sad meaninful poem. had a major effect on meh. great write. ~Tori~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ouch, very good poem, heartache hurts terribly..and i know the feeling..~Eva