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M.D Dinesh Nair
(9/28/2009 8:13:00 AM) |
........a very good poem indeed Sameer.You have a bright future as a poet.Go ahead friend..keep reaching out to the minds...
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tom Mc Quade
(7/28/2009 6:17:00 PM) |
loved it! ..words..skipping, bouncing in great joy..life on a summer day sounds quite nice anywhere it seems.. :) tom
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Lillian Thomas
(6/27/2009 3:01:00 PM) |
it fairly sings off the page! 'In comes summer' is a great repeating line, then bright happy images strung together like beads on a chain. the dancing makes for such a lively ending too!
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Sandra Fowler
(4/30/2009 6:26:00 AM) |
Luminous imagery. I like the bright picture you have painted.
Thank you for sharing your summer world with me.10
without hesitation.
Kind regards,
Sandra
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Cindy Kreiner Sera
(4/18/2009 12:18:00 PM) |
If only this peaceful existance could prevail - what a beautiful and happy write, made me smile Sameer Ahmed - thank you
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Surayya Abbas
(4/18/2009 5:35:00 AM) |
Very true.The whole poem is full of reality in pakistani climate.Well done dear Ayya Aapi
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Teresa Dearing
(4/17/2009 6:36:00 PM) |
Very nice, up beat; I could all most be in the mist of it all.T
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Anthony Foster
(4/17/2009 5:18:00 PM) |
I can feel the heat and hear the laughter of children. Thanx for sharing+10
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