Rambling Dreamer

A Promise - Poem by Rambling Dreamer

When you're stuck on the lonely dark road and no one in view,
Just always remember that i'm the light eagerly waiting to be found by you.
And after all that we have been through,
All i can wish i u know by now my feelings are true.

The climb we're on is steep n tough,
But i assure i'll be your strongest support,
I'll be your warmth n always shelter you,
Like your favorite and secure coat.

You may now wonder what I'll ask in return,
Well its your trust i want to earn.
and something that's simply pricless,
i want to hear those three magic words that will be sealed with a kiss!

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another old poem from the old account :)

Comments about A Promise by Rambling Dreamer

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/23/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    This is a nice romantic poem Nikita! A powerful flow of passion. But I feel you need to reframw the middle four lines. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/23/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    A wistful poem with lovely super rhymin!
    Pls do read my horses poem. Tnx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, August 23, 2013

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