Ruby Honeytip

Rookie - 38 Points (1970)

A Promise


I would make love to you
every night.
Our Souls would be nourished,
By the fruits of our feelings.
The warmth, trust and anticipation
Would build through every intercourse of emotion
And be released
With one knowing heartbeat
Pressed to the other.
You make me believe in God,
For who else could be responsible
For this intimate, glowing gift?
Yes, we would make love to each other
Every night
Then fall asleep

Hand in hand

Submitted: Wednesday, March 26, 2014
Edited: Thursday, March 27, 2014

Topic of this poem: Love


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Comments about this poem (A Promise by Ruby Honeytip )

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (8/31/2014 3:25:00 AM)

    Ruby, you are amazing with the way you can convey your message into a poem...so sensually, and filled with charged emotion.
    Thank you for sharing this with us. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (8/31/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    Ruby, you are amazing with the way you can convey your message into a poem...so sensually, and filled with charged emotion.
    Thank you for sharing this with us. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 282 Points Joseph Anderson (3/27/2014 3:07:00 PM)

    A super charged poem of sensual emotion writen on a high level of intimacy. A really
    beautiful write- a real keeper (Report) Reply

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