Treasure Island

Ruby Honeytip


Cheap Thrill

My feet are pointing high in the air,
I'm blinded by a veil of hair.
My body is shaking, a teardropp appears...
Is it too late to let me out of here!
I sneak a peek at you find this amusing?
My skirt 'round my ears, my neighbours assuming....
That my moaning and screaming is born from fun,
Not knowing my instincts are telling me 'RUN! '
But wait..there's a thrill.....I feel so alive
My body is speeding as though to survive!
Laughter has replaced the feeling of dread.
Smiles have pushed my ears high on my head: -D
By the time I realise, I like it more than I'm s'pose ta
It's time to vacate from my first rollercoaster.

LET'S GO AGAIN! ! ! : -)

© 2012

Submitted: Sunday, December 02, 2012
Edited: Sunday, December 02, 2012

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Stevie Taite gave me the line about a smile so big it pushes your ears up: -D
Go and check her awesome poetry out......I just did.......again: -)

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  • Diane Hine (12/14/2012 7:41:00 PM)

    I love rollercoasters but I think I'm too old for them now. Have you been on 'Tower of Terror' at Dreamworld, Gold Coast- that's my favorite! Teriffic poem! (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo (12/9/2012 9:04:00 AM)

    Loved this surprising poem! and I love rollercoasters as well!

    Great poem here....and such a great thrill! as we approach the next steep hill! :) (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (12/4/2012 11:30:00 AM)

    Just great Ruby - never been on a roller coaster, not my thing, but I can imagine the thrill. (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Anderson (12/4/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    Being a dirty old man I assumed a different scenario. You got me, but I enjoyed
    it, anyhow. I really wanted it to be like my original assumption.A real fun write (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/3/2012 6:29:00 AM)

    Excellent Ruby... I think everything you do is a thrill. what a fabulous personality you have. (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (12/2/2012 1:41:00 PM)

    I was thinking the wrong theme here, so funny, enjoyable with a twist at the end! ! (Report) Reply

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