A Promise To God Poem by ramesh rai
A Promise To God
The sun made a promise to God
to come everyday in the morning
and disburse all the rays
gifted by God
to all the creatures
and go back to his home
by every dusk
The sun is performing his job
all along
he never cares for rain and thunder
every day he comes and
complete his job
performing his job
million years passed
but he never asked
for a reward by God.
Wonderful idea and new images. Message of the poem is elegant.
I truly like the poem.. it's really nice gives such good message to life...
Hi, The sun made a promise to God He never asked for a reward From the God For the duties he offered! Nice poem.
Hi Ramesh, Ahaa! The sun made a promise to God! never asked for a reward from the God! for the duties it offered! Wonderful!
Yes, the sun lavishes his glory on Earth, never seeking a reward! A nice poem! !
An enjoyable piece; loved the concept regarding rewards from God; nice job. -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory A Journey Of... Poetic Purpose
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I would like to translate this poem
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Nice you present what God can do without his subjects asking for rewards...regards