A Relative Twilight Poem by Patti Masterman

A Relative Twilight



A relative twilight obscures night,
And dusty lanes of the Milky Way
Only go glowing at full darks light;
The glittering road the heavens paved.

The constancy of sky's a fact;
And dance of planets there arrayed,
And time that's gone's not coming back-
No matter the words that one could say.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 16 October 2012

Only go glowing at full darks light; - Wow! what a beautiful metaphor; you really are one of the very best writers on here, if not the best, Patti. Write-on.

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Unwritten Soul 11 October 2011

Supernova smile :) :) I like this...Universe always inspired me..I feel so good reading this...i feel like i am flying without gravity so free...and the soul of the poem are from this line 'And time that's gone's not coming back- No matter the words that one could say'...So nice and true_Unwritten Soul

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