Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 18,468 Points (17.03.1965)

A Room Full Of Tears - Poem by Lyn Paul

As I stand in a room full of tears
At this Funeral today
Just feeling your pain, Your loss
Yet amazingly
With this heartache
I feel, The Power of Love
Crying for open arms
The need to bond
To take over this unbearable pain
This pain that feels
It will never heal
How hard to bare this pain
Cry..Cry... Cry..
Never to understand... Just Why?
Why death? This loss. Just why?
As you share this pain
You open your heart for acceptance
In time along with healing, love & memories
Acceptance will grow....
Tears today, tears... for many days
In sunshine and in rain
I will not forget
This room full of tears

Copyright Reserved May 2014

Lyn Paul

Topic(s) of this poem: funeral, goodbye, pain

Comments about A Room Full Of Tears by Lyn Paul

  • Gold Star - 19,005 Points Amitava Sur (5/14/2014 9:05:00 PM)

    An emotional poem suggesting consolation by You open your heart for acceptance (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Hannah Wolton-carr (4/19/2014 10:07:00 AM)

    The worst things bring the best of us together. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,854 Points Susan Lacovara (11/5/2013 7:58:00 PM)

    The outpouring of emotion is so cathartic, especially at a time of great loss... can totally relate to this I am certain many other's do, as well. PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,314 Points Ken E Hall (10/17/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    A sad time conveyed with love yes why is life like this the poem makes you think of self sorry when dear ones go to heaven... a room full of tears...masterful...regards and thanks (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 660 Points Diana Van Den Berg (8/2/2013 12:55:00 AM)

    What a compassionate tribute! I especially love the last 2 lines. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/17/2013 7:17:00 PM)

    a very touching poem Lyn I have felt the pain of loss, your poem brought back many memories. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thomas Cox (1/18/2013 1:11:00 AM)

    a very moving poem as it hurts to see others hurting and not be able to ease their pain no matter how badly you may wish too... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,513 Points Tony Karas (12/28/2012 5:22:00 PM)

    So eternally and deeply sad... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (12/28/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    Well written poem on a difficult subject.
    Having been through bereavement I know only too well the feelings involved.
    Still well done anyway. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,605 Points * Sunprincess * (12/27/2012 8:09:00 PM)

    sure i will never forget said it beautifully..i especially like the last stanza. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (12/27/2012 9:27:00 AM)

    This is a big question-Why death? But, this is inevitable. We all know. Very vivid expression. No ambiguity. Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,685 Points Hazel Durham (12/24/2012 9:01:00 AM)

    You have put into words what people feel when they lose someone close to them, so beautifully written! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (12/19/2012 12:58:00 PM)

    A wonderful descriptive write of a very sad time but reality for all at some point,
    .a mixture of great sadness and love.10 for sure (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (12/18/2012 2:42:00 PM)

    Beautifully written Lyn, a subject many shy away from. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (12/18/2012 10:15:00 AM)

    When the tears of love fall
    For family or a friend
    They are the spring showers call
    Life will return again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (12/18/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    Tears surrounded be a wealth of different emotions, well written Lyn with great empathy. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 148 Points Red O'mara (12/17/2012 9:10:00 PM)

    Tender subject very well and feelingly drawn Lyn. Owain's right, it's a subject we all should be more familiar with and less awkward about. I'm inclined towards the old Irish custom of the wake, where the guest of honour turned on a keg for the crowd. That way, a feller might get a more flattering number of mourners. Would be interested in knowing if you've been to any and have written about the experience. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Owain Glyn (12/17/2012 2:24:00 AM)

    You have covered this subject well. I do not think we discuss death nearly as much as we should.
    I have no more knowledge than anyone else about what comes after but I do think death should be a celebration and that we should feel the excitement of the unknown. Maybe that would destroy some of the fear. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, May 8, 2015

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