kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points (Shimla)

A Shitty Poem - Poem by kanav justa

Some things makes us wise and Some things makes us bad
Sometimes you just wish, you should have listened to your dad
Sometimes you wonder of the things that you have with you
sometimes you just throw them, and bring yourself all new
Sometimes struck in chaos, when your thought seems to shutdown
Thinking of some shit, sometimes black sometimes brown
Why this fkuk has to happen always with me
Like some tire I roll, where dogs come and they pee
Why is that when I sit down to write some serious stuff
I know It aint that easy but it aint that tough
I have tried it in the morning and I have tried it in the night
But why there has to be some shit in whatever I write
Cant I find some good words, some words you might like
To find them I go to some fine place with my driver and my bike
Many songs I have heard and many songs I have sung
But when I sit and write, I see only cow dung
On a fresh morning, looking for something that could inspire
I end up seeing some fresh shit, some fresh shit on some fire

Comments about A Shitty Poem by kanav justa

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/1/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    lol, kanav you can work so good on such humourous pieces as well! ......loved this one... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,698 Points Marie Shine (12/1/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    Awwwww! I adore your delightful sense of humour which shines resplendently though out this finely crafted poem, which is anything but a 'shitty' poem, in fact it is a wonderful creation from your poetic pen, Kanav. I must ask you what 'fkuk' means, as I wondered if you meant 'flux'? Your lines really tickled my sense of humour and the poem is very cleverly penned. In rhyming couplets, it shows the frustration which penning a poem can be for a writer sometimes. The flow is smooth and effortless! I can't stop laughing. EVERYBODY should be forced to read this delightful poem, especially those who are feeling down, because they would only just have begun to read it, when they would soon forget about themselves and enjoy a much needed laugh, until they could laugh no more. Thank you for sharing, Kanav! Excellent crafting. Blessings... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,115 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (11/17/2013 3:10:00 AM)

    Now that is a lot of shit to write
    And keep every thing in rhyme
    But take my word- it is good one too
    As a poem, it does not belong to the loo.......

    A very good piece of work. Inspiration from cow dung! why not? ? Keep on at it and I welcome you to my page too.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,477 Points * Sunprincess * (11/2/2013 8:16:00 PM)

    laughing out loud...we all know you can write...this poem cracks me up: p (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,808 Points Bri Edwards (12/18/2012 6:02:00 PM)

    i have come to read this poet as he sent me a comment. i read a short one and didn't like it much (actually i didn't understand it.......about sun and shadow, etc.) BUT THIS ONE i love....well maybe not love totally, but quite a bit. i'll have to read it again, but for now i'll add it to my mypoemlist..before i forget. and, what the hell, i'll add kanav to my mypoetlist, in hopes it will get me back for more some day and i can see if he gets more or less shitty in the future. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (12/11/2012 6:56:00 AM)

    Oh you sound so moody and grumpy! I guess that's the point! Don't moan about writing shite! Even if a bit twisted it still reads as a poopy delight! Hehehe! You have talent, search out some Wow words(go read my five year olds lesson in poetry!) Do a bit if research in stuff you are interested in, and keep creating! They are your babies, nurture them! (Fetal and folded, cryptic lipstick, catch a poem, prolific poets pen...) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 157 Points Wabi Sabi (12/9/2012 9:44:00 PM)

    your poems tell the truth. and shit is one of the important part of our life, literally. I like your shit because you are a fact teller, not being afraid of becoming one here. I like people like you are. thanks for this poem! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Karen Sinclair (12/9/2012 4:09:00 AM)

    A perfect juxtaposition between humour and pain.... i think all who write or paint suffer the doubts terribly and get the collywobbles (love that word lol) but we get them and doubt our worth....i think the best thing to do sometimes is just walk away for a few hours days even weeks and return with a fresh head and often you realise you were just burnt out or comparing too much...tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,172 Points Neela Nath Das (11/29/2012 10:20:00 AM)

    No Kavita is right. This poem is very nice. I loved the rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie A B (11/29/2012 4:39:00 AM)

    but ur poem isnt a shit, , , , its a gud write :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 29, 2012

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