kanav justa

Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points (Shimla)

A Father Without His Son - Poem by kanav justa

whole his life in days of gloom
he smiled and got things right
but a picture hanging on the wall
is too much of a plight

the echoes of his sweetest voice
he hears in dreams at night
all his dreams he now recalls
to fill heart with false delight

and the sun has set for the final time
his son would never rise
a picture hanging on the wall
is engraved in his gloomy eyes

the memories of his only son
he holds them real tight
in the corner of a lonesome room
a father weeps tonight

Comments about A Father Without His Son by kanav justa

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/1/2014 11:31:00 PM)

    the memories of his only son
    he holds them real tight
    in the corner of a lonesome room
    a father weeps tonight........its so poignant a story, beautifully narrated, makes you weep and thanks god for your parents and kin.......lovely write......... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,613 Points Savita Tyagi (3/20/2014 9:49:00 AM)

    There is nothing more heart breaking than father loosing his only son. Beautiful poem written with deepest emotions. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Maryanne Richards (3/11/2014 1:34:00 AM)

    A Beautiful write from the heart.
    Thank you for your comment on mine. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (3/5/2014 8:47:00 AM)

    .....kanav...you absolutely penned a most BEAUTIFUL poem....this poem is full of LOVE from a father for his son....I see you are truly a GIFTED POET with a HEART of GOLD....when I read your poems and you leave me with this feeling....even though it is not a happy pleasant feeling....but a feeling of sadness.... and a feeling we all will feel at sometime in our life...I find this to be truly AMAZING...you know something else... i haven't read many poems like this....and I have read a lot of poems on ph...I see you have a gift very few poets have...you can inject true FEELINGS into your writes...how can you do this and make it look so easy? ...this makes your poem a true MASTERPIECE....only a TRUE POET could pen a poem like this with such GREAT FEELING....to lose a LOVED one is the worst thing which can happen to anyone...and you CAPTURED this so NICELY in this WONDERFUL write....and yes even though it is a sad poem....this is one of your BEST writes...cause it is full of LOVE.....the REAL TRUE LOVE of FAMILY....the LOVE of a father for a son....wish I was FORTUNATE enough... and could have had this LOVE from a father...but it wasn't for me...unfortunately my father passed away when I was six months old....not sure if this poem is based on someone you know....if this is the case I wish for him to find some COMFORT and PEACE in his remaining family....you know I truly LOVE this poem....cause all who read this will APPRECIATE their family even more...thanks for penning this WONDERFUL poem....I am highly ANTICIPATING your next couple of writes....cause I know they will be true MASTERPIECES....and if they have half the LOVE as this one....they will also be most FABULOUS and WONDERFUL... and yes would like for you to know I LOVE THIS POEM :) ....XOXOXO (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 30 Points Shraddha The Poetess (3/2/2014 11:51:00 PM)

    omg....veryy veryy emotional write..................
    one of the deepest emotion...feeling of a father in this kind of situation...its not that much easy to pen it down..
    great work bhaiyaa......... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,233 Points Amitava Sur (2/26/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    Nothing in this universe can compensate his ruptured wounded heart.... a very poignant touchy write. My sympathy with that ill fated father (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,165 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/23/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Swimming in the sea of sadness yet surging with significant.Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,828 Points Kavya . (2/19/2014 1:12:00 AM)

    very emotional and touchy poem this is Kanav.............yes its really painful plight to be in this situation..........u have penned every line very beautifully, the images run in front of the eyes (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,965 Points Noreen Carden (2/13/2014 9:21:00 AM)

    Hello Kanav what a beautiful poem of sadness and loss.It touches the heart and brings a tear to the eye
    Beautifully written and a great read I give it a ten (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (2/8/2014 11:57:00 AM)

    A very sad and moving write..The pain which a father feels for his lost son, you have penned it so well that each words are painfully poured out. Touching indeed. A Beautiful write Kanav. Loved reading it.
    I am just wondering, how come I missed this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 442 Points Anthony Burkett (2/8/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    The unmitigated sorrow of this poem is almost too much to bear... extraordinarily genuine in its portrayal of grief… if sadness and despair was your aim… then you have most certainly achieved your goal… in spades… well written, Sir! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 226 Points Tristan Love-day (2/7/2014 2:04:00 PM)

    what a beautiful poem, so sad yet so beautiful, thanx for sharing it with meand everyone else, keep up the great work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,305 Points Lyn Paul (2/5/2014 7:57:00 AM)

    A lovely write, you give so much in your every word (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Bijay Poudel (2/5/2014 7:06:00 AM)

    The sadness increases as we read the poem and the last two lines give the concluding pang of sadness. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (2/5/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    a picture hanging on the wall
    is engraved in his gloomy eyes
    beautiful lines! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 414 Points Joseph Anderson (2/4/2014 12:30:00 PM)

    Sad and extremely moving. One must go on.. You presented this lamentation extremely well (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,823 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (2/4/2014 1:10:00 AM)

    Very sad and touching indeed.....really touched my heart...........Kanav........feelings well portrayed......... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,072 Points Ruby Mostazir (2/4/2014 12:16:00 AM)

    in the corner of a lonesome room
    a father weeps tonight..... touchyyy! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Michael Riley Shutt (2/3/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    I weep for much the same reasons, my friend.
    Peace to your soul. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,957 Points * Sunprincess * (2/3/2014 7:51:00 PM)

    .........so poignant and touching...nice kanav.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 3, 2014

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