lady grace


A Simple Plea - Poem by lady grace

my shield can't resist the coming storm
tears will fall down anytime
oh dear...dont close your eyes
don't leave me alone in the night...

keep me under your wings
as you always do to me
build a roof to protect me
i am hopeless..hopeless as can be...

i am more than a great
if you are here by my side
i am more than excellent
if i saw you in my eyes...

you are my one more chance
my last chance to live
please don't ever ever go away
keep me under your wings
please..... stay with me...


Comments about A Simple Plea by lady grace

  • Rookie Ramin Chaman (10/13/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    We Iranian's have a proverb 'that is to say.....'{keep me under your wings.}

    just whatever you say'...and yes it's yummy for me..about your poem...Lady

    that is very nice..and readable...10= (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (10/11/2009 8:40:00 PM)

    what a great trust....an infinitum of giving to the one LOVE....
    my vow of respect to the poet....the romance that lay down of everything just to
    be one of the beloved....wish to reach that trust to the immortality of my soul to the heart that leads the way to its destiny...a 10 +++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gold Fish (10/7/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    brilliant!

    accepting vulnerability to plead to be placed under the shelter of his wings

    Lovely. The emotions are remarkably vivid like a two-edge sword that cuts straight to the heart. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,972 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/24/2009 4:28:00 AM)

    please don't ever ever go away
    keep me under your wings
    please..... stay with me.........and donot go away...it is so touchy feeling and this is staage where everybody go mad......10

    read mine what abt tomorrow...cry not (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Christopher Flynn (7/10/2009 5:47:00 PM)

    Loves embrace
    To show how great
    Together two can be
    And how venerable loneliness can be

    Nice poem Lady Grace (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 156 Points Rafique Farooqi (7/6/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    It is wonderful, start with storm......great GRACE: : : : (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Jason Mcgookin (7/5/2009 11:52:00 PM)

    wow two become 1 some times we need that other person to make us safe and to protect us emotionall, mentally and physically its more than a simple plea (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristina B; Williams (7/5/2009 2:09:00 PM)

    a simple plea, for a 10, lol (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/26/2009 6:54:00 AM)

    'i am more than a great
    if you are here by my side
    i am more than excellent
    if i saw you in my eyes...'

    Lovely love poem. Lovely idea.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 79 Points Efe Benjamin (6/26/2009 4:03:00 AM)

    a simple and lovely plea for love, affection, trust, etcetera.
    very interesting. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (6/26/2009 3:09:00 AM)

    a concern and self esteem.......... let the simple plea come true....... see my 10 ++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Ejaz Khan (6/26/2009 2:58:00 AM)

    Sometimes love is just a one way traffic and it doesn't bite on pity, be strong and show self esteem, if it's real it'll stay. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 26, 2009


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