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thisoul ofmine (5/23/2010 11:30:00 AM)
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sweet kind words for a plea so simple. great job :)
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Ramin Chaman (10/13/2009 7:41:00 PM)
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We Iranian's have a proverb 'that is to say.....'{keep me under your wings.}
just whatever you say'...and yes it's yummy for me..about your poem...Lady
that is very nice..and readable...10=
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Antonio Liao (10/11/2009 8:40:00 PM)
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what a great trust....an infinitum of giving to the one LOVE....
my vow of respect to the poet....the romance that lay down of everything just to
be one of the beloved....wish to reach that trust to the immortality of my soul to the heart that leads the way to its destiny...a 10 +++++
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Gold Fish (10/7/2009 11:25:00 PM)
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brilliant!
accepting vulnerability to plead to be placed under the shelter of his wings
Lovely. The emotions are remarkably vivid like a two-edge sword that cuts straight to the heart. Keep up the good work.
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (8/24/2009 4:28:00 AM)
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please don't ever ever go away
keep me under your wings
please..... stay with me.........and donot go away...it is so touchy feeling and this is staage where everybody go mad......10
read mine what abt tomorrow...cry not
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Christopher Flynn (7/10/2009 5:47:00 PM)
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Loves embrace
To show how great
Together two can be
And how venerable loneliness can be
Nice poem Lady Grace
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Rafique Farooqi (7/6/2009 5:02:00 PM)
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It is wonderful, start with storm......great GRACE: : : :
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Jason Mcgookin (7/5/2009 11:52:00 PM)
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wow two become 1 some times we need that other person to make us safe and to protect us emotionall, mentally and physically its more than a simple plea
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Ashraful Musaddeq (6/26/2009 6:54:00 AM)
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'i am more than a great
if you are here by my side
i am more than excellent
if i saw you in my eyes...'
Lovely love poem. Lovely idea.10+++
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