Refreshing breeze, you waft across my brow,
Relaxing me so well, to thus allow
My mind to wander off in dreams, somehow,
To things of pleasure. All ascending now.
Dazzling sun, you wrap my frame with bliss,
Softening my heart, which then receives solace.
And filling my being with such a sure promise,
That I rise up from a darkening, deep abyss.
Unruffled moon, your light shines from afar,
Lifting the gloom along with each bright star.
Reflecting off the sunbeams own radar.
How wonderful your illuminations are.
Aqueous rain that launders all things new,
Feeding the ground and depositing the dew.
Revive my soul, and with clarity imbue,
As each droplet descends to its known rendezvous.
© Ernestine Northover
You describe and write about things so beautifully...Your poems are a joy to read as they lift ones spirits and soul...........marci. :)
Optimism shines from this soothing lyrical piece. Your poem is a celebration of the power of the elements to lift the spirit and rise above adversity. Beautiful poetry. love, Allie xxxx
Very lovely poem, it gives the heart hope and takes one to a pleasant place. Be well lovely friend, Uriah
You are someone who sees such beauty in everything and has the talent to express it to others who are so fortunate. This poem is exquisite, words flowing and rhyming with perfection Karin Anderson
Lovely imagery, dear fellow poet Erenstine Northover. Some of my poems have a parallel scenery, and so I feel the colours and the depth your verses. I give it a 10
I enjoy you poems about nature, there is so much beauty and captivating silence still to be found in the simplest of things, Another great write by you Ernestine All good things your way... Love duncan X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Stunning Ernestine - I love the the way you embrace the elements and let each revive you. This is an eloquent and uplifting write full of delightful rhymes and vivid imagery. Warmest wishes, Justine.