A Tale Of Fire And Ice Poem by Andrea Dietrich
A Tale Of Fire And Ice
Part I: Ice
He shines like silver midnight moon -
cool marble statue, this tycoon.
And though he makes the ladies swoon,
of ice he's hewn.; of ice he's hewn.
He's poker-faced and can deceive
competitors and can achieve
most anything, but can't conceive
of Genevieve, of Genevieve.
Like Neptune, distant from the sun -
relationships he chose to shun.
He thought the search for love was done.
He has no one; he has no one.
Now love's allure has come his way.
What will he do? What will he say?
Will he grab hold, beg love to stay,
or let it stray? Or let it stray?
Part II: Fire
This dragoness disguised in lace -
passion's flower with angel's face,
precisely picks the time and place
each dream to chase, each dream to chase.
Like ink the color red, she stains
the hearts of those whose love she drains,
and then she leaves when naught remains
No lust she feigns; no lust she feigns.
And now there's one who would suffice.
For him alone, she'd sacrifice
her everything, so he of ice
she must entice, she must entice.
So Genevieve now strikes the flame.
Will man of ice his love proclaim?
Beneath her fire and his cold frame,
they're both the same. They're both the same.
Heard your voice reading a poem, You read well - come to nyc and come to a reading - you will be well received I am sure!
Absolutely beautiful. congratulations for such an amazing write.
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Dear Andrea, yours is one of the better poems I saw in the entire contest. Your poem reminded me of the style employed by Terry O'Leary in his poem The Stone. You have a definite natural talent. You may actually win a prize! ! ! Wish you all the best for the contest. But you cannot predict anything in an Online Contest like this - which can be easily manipulated by cyber savvy poets! ! (See my poem Poem Hunter Contest Final just to have an idea of how a contest can be manipulated...)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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i like it! i give it a very good score. intriguing story. i just noticed HOW good the rhyming is (i've been reading poems while talking on the phone!) i just read it again. now i'll give it excellent. :) thanks for sharing