when i spoke to you
from my heart
you listened to me with a smile
your reply was from your mind
and that's when our conversation broke
when i speak from the heart
it is like the gush of the sea wave
we cannot draw the waves line
it comes..expresses and retreats
nothing is held back
when you speak from the mind
it is like a flying kite
though a true wind flights it up
it does not say all it has
a pair of hands holds it back
when a mind speaks to a mind
there is only a diplomatic noise
no word spoken is really meant
a conversations never begins even
when just a mind speaks to another
a tete a tete
a heart to heart..conversation alone
truth when facing truth alone
solves and resolves our gaps
I am very glad to read this poem. At this point of your evolution you have caught the right kind of philosophy. Now onwards, don't fall short of this view. You have reached the summit. What more remains to be conquerred? Spread the same philosophy through your poems for a better world. This is all we can do as poets.
Sir your work is ineffable. this is what I have been trying to express in all my love poems. People say they are poignant yes maybe they are but u have done it splendidly. Heart to heart comment this is then sir. Teach me as your own son abt philosophy sir. Abt life i need those lessons, i need them only from you.
Nice tit; e...nice theme...nice write....nice differentiating heart from mind....indeed a very good poem
Heart represents love. When one heart talks to another heart, that is the meeting point for love and affection between two souls,
'a tete a tete a heart to heart..conversation alone truth when facing truth alone solves and resolves our gaps ' ..ok, i like the way this is written..hearts have languages, it depends on how to express..but wait..i just want to ask if ''a tete a tete''is what word, , , i dont want to go to google so kindly send the meaning either in this page or in my inbox..am confused of it...thanks for inviting sammmmm...smileeeee
Hi Sam...delightful poem. Yes. Heart language is hard to come by these days. The head seems to let the ego take the lead.However, our poems may help enlighten as well as delight.10+++
A heartfelt write. Your second stanza expresses your emotions most effectively.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
really nice.... difference between talking with my hear and talking with my mind... a very great theme..thoughts are so reflective... i love this 10+++ Maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice write! one of my teacher puts it this way, she says that when she talks from her heart, she feels that some of us show that 'We see her! ' its a beautiful feeling that the poem conveys!