A Thought Forgotten Poem by Eric Cockrell

A Thought Forgotten

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rain swept branches strewn,
small testaments of living.
frail egos broken
in morning sunlit pieces.
of such is life...
hands made of flesh
building hearts.
storms come unannounced,
and forever shattered.
the rain soaks the embers,
a thin wisp of smoke.
stirred by the stick of time,
praying for flame.

are we then fire,
or just smoke?
smalls branches clinging
to the tree...
lightning in the distance,
or hearts made of thunder?
buds on the broken branch,
or the fleeting instant
of the storm's fury?
all of these, or something else,
or a thought forgotten
by a lonesome God?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 17 March 2012

A fantastic poem, great write.

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Smoky Hoss 17 March 2012

Wow Eric, you've certainly penned a gem with this one, it is great!

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Hans Vr 17 March 2012

Amazing questions, Eric. Honest questions, shaking us somehow out of our comfort zone. Thought provoking. Very well written poem.

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